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This is my homework - composition.
Reasons of bad health.
I can tell many reasons of bad health. For example: wrone feeding, smoking, alcohol, drugs, overwork, not have enough sleep. Most people eat unhealthy food, therefore their health is bad. Unfortunately we can't eat only useful food.
When people smoke, drink alcohol or take drugs their organism will destroy. When people have over work or haven't enough sleep they won't feel quite well. When in winter people dress light outdoor clothes they will catch cold.
Now we can't be absolutely healthy, because we have the air pollution from factories.
Sep 29th 2009 19:30 Sarahu

  • Reasons of bad health.
  • Reasons for poor health.

 

  • I can tell many reasons of bad health.
  • I can think of many reasons for poor health.

 

  • For example: wrone feeding, smoking, alcohol, drugs, overwork, not have enough sleep.
  • For example: a poor diet, smoking, alcohol, drugs, overwork and exhaustion.

 

  • Most people eat unhealthy food, therefore their health is bad.
  • Many people eat unhealthy food, and then their health declines.

 

  • Unfortunately we can't eat only useful food.
  • Unfortunately we can't always eat healthy food.

 

  • When people smoke, drink alcohol or take drugs their organism will destroy.
  • When people smoke, drink alcohol or take drugs they destroy organisms in their bodies.

 

  • When people have over work or haven't enough sleep they won't feel quite well.
  • When people have over work themselves or don't get enough sleep, they don't feel quite well.

 

  • When in winter people dress light outdoor clothes they will catch cold.
  • When in winter people dress in light outdoor clothes in winter they will catch colds.

 

  • Now we can't be absolutely healthy, because we have the air pollution from factories.
  • Now We can't ever be absolutely healthy, because we also suffer from have the air pollution from factories.

 
A very informative composition :) Well done!

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