National Day
Oct 01st 2009 20:06
Today is National Day!
So, get up early this morning watch TV live!
But, almost the same feel every time!
In addition to this the number of parade outside a lot. are all in step!
What attract me was the evening fireworks show!
Unfortunately, can not come to the scene, only in front of the TV
So, get up early this morning watch TV live!
But, almost the same feel every time!
In addition to this the number of parade outside a lot. are all in step!
What attract me was the evening fireworks show!
Unfortunately, can not come to the scene, only in front of the TV
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So, I got up early this morning to watch the live broadcast on TV!
But, it almost felt the same as every other time!
In addition to this, there were a large number of parades outside a lot.
They were all marching in step!
What attracted me (most) was the evening fireworks show! -------> You can also say "What I liked best" OR "What I enjoyed the most"
Unfortunately, I could not go to the scene of the fireworks myself - I could only watch them on TV
But ... it almost felt just like the same feel every other time. (I feel like the tone of this sentence should be a bit more downtrodden/sad/disappointed, so I took out the exclamation point [!]. I also simplified the sentence by using a 'like' pattern rather than the 'as' pattern, which didn't sound appropriate with the verb 'feel'.)
Unfortunately, can not come to the scene, only in front of the TV I could not go see the fireworks myself -- I could only watch them on TV. (I basically agree with minkyleigh's corrections, but I don't think you need to mention 'scene' here -- when we say "see the fireworks," we imply that we see them in person, especially if you add 'myself'.)