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I feel like writing a big entry now, but I can't seem to, with my slow mind and heavy eyelids...Coming up with sentences that satisfy me decently takes ages! ;) I feel most content when I suceed to describe or express sth, using syntaxes and phrases only special to the language. X) That's what primarily makes language learners rewarded!

How nice of you to spare the time to read, well, such an unsophisticated entry. ;)
Please point out just anything that has room for improvement!
Nov 12th 2009 01:22 ymistry

  • ;) I feel most content when I suceed to describe or express sth, using syntaxes and phrases only special to the language.
  • ;) I feel most content when I succeed in to describing or expressing myself sth, using syntaxes and phrases only special to the language.

 

  • Please point out just anything that has room for improvement!
  • Please point out just anything that has room for improvement!

 

"I feel like writing a big entry now, but I can't seem to, with my slow mind and heavy eyelids...Coming up with sentences that satisfy me decently takes ages!"

> I love this sentence and couldn't agree more!
Nov 12th 2009 03:46 Lefty

  • ;) I feel most content when I suceed to describe or express sth, using syntaxes and phrases only special to the language.
  • ;) I feel most content when I succeed to in describing or expressing sth something, using syntaxes and phrases only special to the language.

 

  • X) That's what primarily makes language learners rewarded!
  • X) That's what primarily makes the main reward for language learners rewarded! (This was a little awkward. The way I reworded it is one possibility...)

 

  • Please point out just anything that has room for improvement!
  • Please point out just anything that has any place where there is room for improvement! ("Just" is unnecessary here. We usually say that, with regard to something, there is room for improvement, not that something has room for improvement. "As far as this paper goes, there's room for improvement", not "This paper has room for improvement"...)

 
Nice work!

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