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Vent. Hi "pem" ^^
Since you thought that there was not much to be learned from writing this blog, I figured you weren't that inter...
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Vent. Come on, man! Everything will be ok when u speak it out which means u have the courage to face with it. But to be honest, ur English is p...
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...Such a Depressing Entry ... Hi you! What's up?
I'm sorry to hear you're having such a rough time being around your family. I hope some of the surprises of the US ...
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First Entry in January :D Hey you! :P
You rock for writing such a lengthy post! I hope you don't mind me correcting it in parts. Keep on experimenting :) also, pl...
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Today's thoughts... Multiple words in a row that begin with the same letter or sound (finding fatal faults) is called "alliteration."
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~~~ Personally, I'd say it's because your English is almost perfect (^^=) If I didn't know better, I would think you were a native English sp...
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;「 I've assumed that the "please be harsh in correcting my English" was implicit..!
I sometimes feel like this too, especially ne...
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;O Wow, yeah, I know what you mean. I haven't heard a word from my boyfriend in over 2 weeks, even though he promised we'd talk on weekends....
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Missing a Friend. I don't think you'd need any "harsh" corrections in your English. I think it's very well-written! :)
Don't be down on yours...
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Writing Task! Great Job! this journal sounds very formal and professional! Your English is very good! Continue to try hard with your English, as it is ...
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:D Wow your English is really high level, I am having to turn on pedantic mode. I guess that's why you don't attract much correction.
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I was born 20 years ago...q... What, it's your birthday today?! Happy birthday!! :D Gefeliciteerd! Your story is heartwarming, I'm glad you had a great time with everyo...
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Daily Blogs Again...? Hi Pem,
Everything you wrote was correct. The changes I made were to make your writing sound more current. As it stands, you sound ver...
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Good News. your sentences a really good! I just changed a few things to make it more natural. ^_^
I'm glad you have such a good friend! I hope y...
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Etymology! You know so much English that you're learning doctor terms? I don't even know what a periodontist or exodontist are! As long as you're ...
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April Fools. Very Good!
Personally, I think April Fool's Day is as pointless as something like Halloween. I was wary of things yesterday but I stil...
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A Lengthy Entry. I mostly fixed issues with your wording. I understood most of your ideas and wanted to keep your ideas in the entry.
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A Vow! Hi dear!
Sounds great! Good luck with this arduous new undertaking! I look forward to seeing you use all those new words and expressio...
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A Job Interview~ Wow, that's so impressive! I really hope you can write about being behind-the-scenes at fashion shows! I'm so jealous ;_;
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:) Hi dear,
Here you go, a long overdue correction on one of your entries! :) I had fun suggesting some poetic alternatives for you, they...
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Saturday, 20th Februrary 2010 For now I'm centering most of my attention on a different blog entry of yours, but a few quick things:
Heel shoes are commonly called ...
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:) Hi! ^^
You deserve more comments/corrections, I'm sorry you don't get them! I'm partially to blame! ;)
I don't have time to do a correc...
Complimenti
すごいイタリア語!Bravissima!
pem1990さんはイタリア語が本当に上手です! brava!! complimenti!
Hi "pem" ^^ Since you thought that there was not much to be learned from writing this blog, I figured you weren't that inter...
Come on, man! Everything will be ok when u speak it out which means u have the courage to face with it. But to be honest, ur English is p...
Hi you! What's up? I'm sorry to hear you're having such a rough time being around your family. I hope some of the surprises of the US ...
Hey you! :P You rock for writing such a lengthy post! I hope you don't mind me correcting it in parts. Keep on experimenting :) also, pl...
Multiple words in a row that begin with the same letter or sound (finding fatal faults) is called "alliteration."
それは大変みたいだな、、、PMにて連絡してね。
へええ、イギリスで留学する?? すごい! かも。 (笑 ニューヨークで留学するはずよ~ あはは、 おめでとう、ぺむ!
Personally, I'd say it's because your English is almost perfect (^^=) If I didn't know better, I would think you were a native English sp...
おひさー! 元気?? いやーー、この学期はやっと終わったっ! 今から、もっとぺむさんの日記を添削させる! ごめんね、しばらくL-8に来なかった。 (T0T)
I've assumed that the "please be harsh in correcting my English" was implicit..! I sometimes feel like this too, especially ne...
Both are good exercises (・艸・)
アグリー・ベティ? その番組はそんなに魅力がある? あはは、知らない、俺。 クイズを頑張れ!
勉強は大切ですが、リラックスも大切ですね!
Oops, missed something :D
あはは、、、(´Д`;)
Maybe he's just busy with work or something?
Wow, yeah, I know what you mean. I haven't heard a word from my boyfriend in over 2 weeks, even though he promised we'd talk on weekends....
残念ですね。 もし彼がこのページを見えたら、pemさんの気持ちがわかるでしょうか。 pemさんの気持ちも大切です。 だから、 pem doesn't need to feel stupid at all :) take care.
残念ですね、、、
I don't think you'd need any "harsh" corrections in your English. I think it's very well-written! :) Don't be down on yours...
Reading your diary I am sure that you are a good friend. Make new friends! You will be better.
Great description, I couldn't have written something similar in Japanese!
Great Job! this journal sounds very formal and professional! Your English is very good! Continue to try hard with your English, as it is ...
It's very good!
Wow your English is really high level, I am having to turn on pedantic mode. I guess that's why you don't attract much correction.
There's nothing to correct except "well funny" is slightly lower-class English English, and you could sound better, eg, "I...
That's really well-written. I had to struggle to insert the "to" and even that's arguable.
I told you your English was good ;) I had only 1.5 sentence to correct..!
I know you'll do great on your exam!
I feel sorry for you.. I guess? Feel free to share!
お誕生日おめでとうございます!
What, it's your birthday today?! Happy birthday!! :D Gefeliciteerd! Your story is heartwarming, I'm glad you had a great time with everyo...
Hi Pem, Everything you wrote was correct. The changes I made were to make your writing sound more current. As it stands, you sound ver...
Even pointless conversations like that can be good for practice, or just killing time. ^^
your sentences a really good! I just changed a few things to make it more natural. ^_^ I'm glad you have such a good friend! I hope y...
You know so much English that you're learning doctor terms? I don't even know what a periodontist or exodontist are! As long as you're ...
Very Good! Personally, I think April Fool's Day is as pointless as something like Halloween. I was wary of things yesterday but I stil...
I mostly fixed issues with your wording. I understood most of your ideas and wanted to keep your ideas in the entry.
I know what you feel. Sometimes it's hard to make really good friends =[
Hi dear! Sounds great! Good luck with this arduous new undertaking! I look forward to seeing you use all those new words and expressio...
頑張ってください!私は俳句の本を買いましたが、まだ読みません。
Wow, that's so impressive! I really hope you can write about being behind-the-scenes at fashion shows! I'm so jealous ;_;
You're not rusty at all. Donating blood scares me! :X I hope you can join the Red Cross!
Hi dear, Here you go, a long overdue correction on one of your entries! :) I had fun suggesting some poetic alternatives for you, they...
For now I'm centering most of my attention on a different blog entry of yours, but a few quick things: Heel shoes are commonly called ...
Can you give an example of the 'a few' rule?
Hi! ^^ You deserve more comments/corrections, I'm sorry you don't get them! I'm partially to blame! ;) I don't have time to do a correc...