pem1990
Last login: More than 3 days ago
- Native language
- Japanese
- Learning
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English
Italian
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デレック
- Since it's Saturday, ridiculous amount of people came, and the whole thing was in such a vibrant atmosphere!
- Since it's Saturday, ridiculous amounts of people came, and the whole thing had such a vibrant atmosphere!
mcfroob
- It's the change of season at the moment, so take care everyone!
- It's the change of season The seasons are changing at the moment, so take care everyone!
Quelsi ❀
- Just a moment ago, it became painfully clear to me that my English grammar still leaves much to be desired...(sigh)
- Just a moment ago, it became painfully clear to me that my English grammar still has a lot of room for improvement leaves much to be desired...(sigh)
chappy
- For a moment I missed her and the good old days we spent together during high school days, when one completely unexpected idea sprang up.
- For a moment I missed her, remembering [CROSS OUT]and[/CROSS OUT] the good old days we spent together during high school days, when one a completely unexpected idea sprang up.
chappy
- I kept feeling as if I was craving for this sort of existence, I mean, that of someone with wholehearted love for me.
- I kept feeling as if I was craving for this sort of existence. I mean, that of What I mean is having someone with who has a wholehearted love for me.
Paigeums
- Now I feel I need to review all the helpful corrections I've received so far to, obviously, learn much from them.
- Now I feel I need to review all the helpful corrections I've received so far to, obviously, because I have a lot to learn much from them.
S-in-Japan
- X( But then, it greatly helps me not to easily drop out from this brilliant habit I've acquired.
- X( But then, it helps me greatly not to break this brilliant habit I've acquired. (too many adverbs - try to limit them to one a sentence or at least far apart in the sentence)
Betsy
- I once stopped going to the piano school to prepare for the entrance exam of the university.
- I once stopped going to the piano school to prepare for the entrance exam of at the university.
mourishin
- Slurping noodles is one of the habits of the Japanese people which they can't simply get out of.
- Slurping noodles is one of the habits of the Japanese people which they can't simply get rid of.
タキモロ
- I appreciate you for sparing the time to read this!
- I appreciate you for sparing the time to read this!
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