My goal in 2009
2008 was already finished, although I had a bad experienced last few months of the year, 2008 was been a very good year for me. Therefore, I want this year to be great to.
Last year, I earned money and I want to use it in opening a business. I want to open small computer cafe in our place. My brother will help me managing the business. I want to have another source of income aside from my salary.
I hope it will be successful, I may very helpful with me and my brother. I don't have enough money to buy lots of computers so I decided to start only 5 computers. I wish my computer cafe will content 12-15 PC before this year end.
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Can anyone check my English grammar? Thank you very much.
I want to translate this into Japanese when I already have the corrections.
Last year, I earned money and I want to use it in opening a business. I want to open small computer cafe in our place. My brother will help me managing the business. I want to have another source of income aside from my salary.
I hope it will be successful, I may very helpful with me and my brother. I don't have enough money to buy lots of computers so I decided to start only 5 computers. I wish my computer cafe will content 12-15 PC before this year end.
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Can anyone check my English grammar? Thank you very much.
I want to translate this into Japanese when I already have the corrections.
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Therefore, I want this year to be great too.
I hope it will be successful, I may very helpful with me and my brother. with my brother and I working together, I think we can provide a good service. (is it what is meant?)
Thank you for the correction.By the way sorry I wrote it very wrong... I mean (The computer cafe will be very helpful for me and my brother. )