Would someone please correct this?

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Nov 22nd 2009 01:29

My ideal job is an urban design profession that enable me to design a city with consideration for policy, economy, culture and citizens. Actually, the regeneration of shrinking cities is an interesting issue. For instance, there is a problem in downtown Cheongju. The population of Downtown has decreased since the early 1990’s. Otherwise the city is growing outward. We have to figure out how to solve this problem because our environment is getting worse in many places. I want to be one of the group members who work to solve these kinds of problems in a city. I think my major was not professional course. So I’d better go to a Master's program to learn research skill of cities. It may be hard going through a master program in the US. Above all, English is a problem. However I realizeed it’s not a problem, I should study by myself to meet the requirement's they want. It will be proved by me if I pass exams to apply to do it. It's an essential course to reach my ideal job. Passion toward the job is challenging me to do better in this study.

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Nov 22nd 2009 03:10

Pleas, anybody fix this writing.
Would someone please correct this?

The moment that she puts her hand on my knee, I felt so warm-hearted ever I've experience.
The moment that she put her hand on my knee, I felt a warmness I've never experienced before.

I always have felt sorry to her since I reject my own job offering even I could get it.
I've always felt bad ever since I rejected that job offer.

I want to enter master program in U.
I want to enter a master's degree program in the U.S.

at next year Many people say University of Arizona is not good but I want to become a grades student of it.
at next year Many people say that the University of Arizona isn't a great university but I still want to go there.

Becasue about one and half year ago i'd went arizona to participate workshop and its experience lead me to change my path.
Because about a year or so ago I went Arizona to participate in a workshop and my experience there lead me to change my career path.

People say that Upenn, Harvard, MIT have naming value.
People say that universities like Penn State, Harvard, MIT are the best.

Professor say if you can go U.
My professor says if you choose to go study abroad, you should apply to a big university and not a small less renown one.

you should apply university locating as big city as possible you can go, not small city.
you should apply university locating as big city as possible you can go, not small city.

One report proposes grad-schools list by priority of paper numbers of urban design related.
One report lists the top grad-schools for their urban design programs.

I really want to get sight-seeing related urban design.
I really want to get into sight-seeing related urban design.

It might be a long way to get urban design profession.
I might have a long way to go before becomming an urban design professional.

Or I need not apply master program because although I need school, community for working on its area, learning urban design, urban planning, real-estate, economy, politic related city and so on; All of those depend on me, not by others.
Or maybe I won't apply for urban design. Either way, the choice is mine to make, how I want to make it. It's not anyone else's decision.(I guess this is what you meant?)