Can you check my writing?: a folk village of Korea

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Hello, I wrote of a traditional folk village where is a famous place of korea. I hope you can enjoy it. : )

Yangdong folk village is one of the traditional villages remained intact. It is located 20 km northeast from Gyungju city and surrounded by beautiful natural environment. The village founded by both of Son and Lee family and inherited for 500 years by the families. You can look around hundreds years old tile roofed houses and straw roofed ones and also walk along soiled paths with feeling of Korean traditional village’s atmosphere.

There are interesting features of it. First of all, Residents are living in old old houses. For example, when I visited Jeonju Hanok village in Jeonbuk province, old houses were empty because people worry Hanok spoiled by residents. Actually, it was not really village but an exhibition place. As concerned as this point, the village is an exciting place.

Also, Yangdon is a historic noble village. Above the picture leads me to Yangdong because I was impressed we can catch a glimpse of the traces of class society back in the day by the picture.
Yangban used to live in on the head of slope and Nobi which indicate servants live underneath of them. The structure of village was affected by society system.

If foreigners ask me of not to missed traditional places, I will strongly recommend he/she Yangdong village. It is the perfect place to experience of traditional village indirectly.
Feb 22nd 2010 01:41 Mattie

  • Can you check my writing?: a folk village of Korea
  • Can you check my writing?: afolk village of KoreaCan you check my writing? Titled: A Folk Village of Korea

 
When you are informing the reader of your story/writing/paper tell them that it is "Titled:..." It sounds more formal, as if you were reading it to an audience. You also capitalize all the words of a title besides articles. Love the story, I hope to visit soon ^-^
Feb 22nd 2010 14:57 pixie

  • Hello, I wrote of a traditional folk village where is a famous place of korea.
  • Hello, I wrote of about a traditional folk village where which is a famous place in Korea.

 

  • Yangdong folk village is one of the traditional villages remained intact.
  • Yangdong folk village is one of the traditional villages that remained intact.

 

  • It is located 20 km northeast from Gyungju city and surrounded by beautiful natural environment.
  • It is located 20 km northeast from Gyungju city and is surrounded by beautiful natural environment.

 

  • The village founded by both of Son and Lee family and inherited for 500 years by the families.
  • The village was founded by both of Son and Lee families and they inherited it for 500 years. by the families.

 

  • You can look around hundreds years old tile roofed houses and straw roofed ones and also walk along soiled paths with feeling of Korean traditional village’s atmosphere.
  • You can look around at hundreds of years old tiled roofed houses and straw roofed houses ones and also walk along soiled paths with the feeling of Korean traditional village’s atmosphere.

 

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