My family
My family is father, mother and 2 younger brothers.They live in Nagoya now.I lived there together about 2 years ago.But I live in Tokyo alone now.
My father works at a gas company in Nagoya.He is not hadosome, but he always helps me when I have a problem.He is very outgoing, so he often is not at home on his day off.He usually goes to play golf, baseball, fishing and so on.And he likes to drink alcohol.So I worry about his health.
My mother works at a hospital.She is a medical receptionist.I am also working at a hospital as a rihabiritation therapist now.I think that my present job was her influence.She is kind and beautiful.^0^And she is strong.I haven't seen her tears.I am same age when she deliverd us, I think that she is really strong!Her hobby is gardenig. So she often weeds all day long.
One of my brothers graduated from college last year and works part-time now.He likes basketball, so he sometimes coaches children's basketball team waht he belonged in childhood.He has been taller than me since we were children.So I am mistaken a lot that he is my older brother.
One of my brother is college student.He studies English and education there.His dream is working at an elementary school as an English teacher.His hobby is palying baseball, so he also coaches baseball team what he belonged in childhood.
My family is ordinary family, but they are my precious things.
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私の家族は父、母、弟2人です。彼らは今名古屋に住んでいます。私は一緒に2年前そこに住んでいました。しかし、今は東京で一人暮らしをしています。
私の父は名古屋のガス会社で働いています。彼はかっこよくはないけど、私が困っている時いつも助けてくれます。彼は外交的なので、休みの日はよく家にいません。いつもゴルフや野球や釣りなんかに行ってます。それから、彼はお酒を飲むことが好きです。だから私は彼の健康が心配です。
私の母は病院で働いています。彼女は医療事務職員です。私もリハビリのセラピストとして今病院で働いています。私の今の職業は彼女の影響だと思います。彼女は優しくて美人です。^0^そして、強い。私は彼女の涙を見たことがありません。私は母が私たちを生んだ歳と同じになり、本当に強い人だなと思います。彼女の趣味は園芸です。だから彼女はよく一日中草取りをしています。
弟の一人は昨年大学を職業し、今はアルバイトをしています。彼はバスケットボールが好きで、時々彼が子供のころに所属してたチームに教えに行っています。彼は私よりも子供のころから背が高いです。私はよく彼は私の兄だと勘違いされます。
もう一人の弟は、大学生です。英語と教育を学んでいます。彼の夢は小学校で英語の先生として働くこと。彼の趣味は野球をすることで、彼も子供のころに所属していたチームに教えに行っています。
私の家族はごく平凡な家族だけど、彼らは私の大事な人たちです。
My father works at a gas company in Nagoya.He is not hadosome, but he always helps me when I have a problem.He is very outgoing, so he often is not at home on his day off.He usually goes to play golf, baseball, fishing and so on.And he likes to drink alcohol.So I worry about his health.
My mother works at a hospital.She is a medical receptionist.I am also working at a hospital as a rihabiritation therapist now.I think that my present job was her influence.She is kind and beautiful.^0^And she is strong.I haven't seen her tears.I am same age when she deliverd us, I think that she is really strong!Her hobby is gardenig. So she often weeds all day long.
One of my brothers graduated from college last year and works part-time now.He likes basketball, so he sometimes coaches children's basketball team waht he belonged in childhood.He has been taller than me since we were children.So I am mistaken a lot that he is my older brother.
One of my brother is college student.He studies English and education there.His dream is working at an elementary school as an English teacher.His hobby is palying baseball, so he also coaches baseball team what he belonged in childhood.
My family is ordinary family, but they are my precious things.
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私の家族は父、母、弟2人です。彼らは今名古屋に住んでいます。私は一緒に2年前そこに住んでいました。しかし、今は東京で一人暮らしをしています。
私の父は名古屋のガス会社で働いています。彼はかっこよくはないけど、私が困っている時いつも助けてくれます。彼は外交的なので、休みの日はよく家にいません。いつもゴルフや野球や釣りなんかに行ってます。それから、彼はお酒を飲むことが好きです。だから私は彼の健康が心配です。
私の母は病院で働いています。彼女は医療事務職員です。私もリハビリのセラピストとして今病院で働いています。私の今の職業は彼女の影響だと思います。彼女は優しくて美人です。^0^そして、強い。私は彼女の涙を見たことがありません。私は母が私たちを生んだ歳と同じになり、本当に強い人だなと思います。彼女の趣味は園芸です。だから彼女はよく一日中草取りをしています。
弟の一人は昨年大学を職業し、今はアルバイトをしています。彼はバスケットボールが好きで、時々彼が子供のころに所属してたチームに教えに行っています。彼は私よりも子供のころから背が高いです。私はよく彼は私の兄だと勘違いされます。
もう一人の弟は、大学生です。英語と教育を学んでいます。彼の夢は小学校で英語の先生として働くこと。彼の趣味は野球をすることで、彼も子供のころに所属していたチームに教えに行っています。
私の家族はごく平凡な家族だけど、彼らは私の大事な人たちです。
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In my family there are my parents and my two younger brothers.
We lived there together about 2 years ago.
He is not handsome, but he always helps me when I have a problem.
He usually plays golf, baseball and goes fishing etc...
He also likes to drink alcohol, so I worry about his health.
My mother works at a hospital as a medical receptionist.
I also work there as a rehabilitation therapist (for the time being). (Only if you mean you work there just for now)
I think that it was her influence that made me take my present job.
I have never seen her cry. (More commonly used phrase)
We were the same age when she delivered us, I think that she is really strong! Her hobby is gardening.
So she often kills weeds all day long.
He likes basketball, so sometimes he coaches the school basketball teams from his childhood.
So people always think that he is my older brother.
One of my brothers is a college student.
His hobby is playing baseball, so he also coaches the baseball team from his childhood.
My family is an ordinary family, but they are precious to me.
Many of the corrections I have made are not because what you have said is wrong. I just think the way you have said it doesn't sound natural to me.
すごいね!がんばってよ!
He usually goes to play golf or baseball, goes fishing, and so on. [or "et cetera"]
He has been taller than me since we were children, so people always think that he is my older brother.
So I am mistaken a lot that he is my older brother. [It's more natural to make this one sentence.]
My other brother is a college student. [Since you said "one of my brothers" already, you can say, "my other brother" here. It is a little more natural.]
My family is strange and often complicated. ^_^*
Thank you for correcting and your message.
Nice to meet you.
I think that natural phrases are difficult.
So I write here and learn your correcting.
Do your best for study Japanese, too!
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修正とメッセージをありがとう。
はじめまして。
自然な言い回しは難しいと思います。
だから私はここに書いて、あなたたちの添削から習います。
あなたも日本語の勉強頑張って!
Thank you for correcting every time!
My family is also strange!
Because my father says boring jokes, my mother songs strange songs and brothers sometimes don't get home...
When I was a child, we often quarreled each other.
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いつも修正をありがとう!
私の家族も変わり者よ!
だって、父はつまらない冗談を言うし、母は変な歌を歌うし、弟たちは時々帰ってこないし。。。
私が子供だった時はよくお互いに言い合いのケンカをしたよ。