Dear My Host Family

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My host family decided at last.
I got an e-mail from my host mother.
So I must reply but I don't have confidence.
Please correct my e-mail below.
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Thank you very much for your e-mail. Nice to meet you!
At first, I intoroduce myself.
My name is Miki Hattori, please call me Miki.
I'm 26 years old. I'm from Nagoya, Japan but I live in Tokyo alone now.
My family(father, mother and two younger brothers) lives in Aichi(Nagoya).

My job is a rehabilitation therapist (occupational therapist) so I'm working in the Japanese hospital.
I rehabilitate for patients who have cerebrovascular accident and dementia.
I have worked for 5 years but I will quit for a working holiday at this time.

My hobby is cooking, making breads, surfing the internet and snowboarding.
I like snowbording so I chose Canada for my study abroad.

I think that I want to experience Canadian culture and life-style.
Please tell me about your family's rule if I arrive at Canada.
I do my best and study English hard!
I go to English shcool now but I can't speak well yet.

I'm looking forward to meet you, too!!


From Miki
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先日、私のホストファミリーが決定しました。
ホストマザーからのe-mailを受け取りました。
だから私は返信をしないといけないけど、自信がありません。
どうか、下記のe-mailを修正してください。
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e-mailありがとうございます。はじめまして!
最初に、私の自己紹介をします。
私の名前ははっとり みきです、みきと呼んでください。
私は26歳です。私は日本の名古屋出身ですが、今は東京に一人で住んでいます。
私の家族(父、母、弟2人)は愛知(名古屋)に住んでいます。

私の仕事はリハビリのセラピスト(作業療法士)で、日本の病院で働いています。
私は脳卒中や認知症の患者さんをリハビリします。
私は5年間働きましたが、今回のワーキングホリデーのために退職します。

私の趣味は料理、パン作り、インターネット、スノーボードです。
私はスノーボードが好きなので、留学先にカナダを選択しました。

私はカナダの文化や生活習慣を体験したいと思っています。
私がカナダに着いたら、あなたたち家族のルールを教えて下さいね。
私はベストを尽くし、一生懸命英語を勉強します!
私は今、英会話学校に通ってるけど、まだあまり上手く話すことができません。

私もあなたたちに会えるのを楽しみにしています!!


みきより
Feb 10th 2010 08:36 aeroplane

  • So I must reply but I don't have confidence.
  • So I must reply but I don't have confidence in my writing.

 

  • At first, I intoroduce myself.
  • At first, I'll introduce myself.

 

  • My family(father, mother and two younger brothers) lives in Aichi(Nagoya).
  • My family (father, mother and two younger brothers) live in Aichi (Nagoya).

 

  • My job is a rehabilitation therapist (occupational therapist) so I'm working in the Japanese hospital.
  • My job is a rehabilitation therapist (occupational therapist) so I'm working in a Japanese hospital.

 

  • I rehabilitate for patients who have cerebrovascular accident and dementia.
  • I rehabilitate for patients who have had cerebrovascular accidents and dementia.

 

  • I have worked for 5 years but I will quit for a working holiday at this time.
  • I have worked for 5 years but I will quit my job for a working holiday during this time.

 

  • I think that I want to experience Canadian culture and life-style.
  • I think that I want to experience Canadian culture and life-style. (if you want to sound more positive then take out "i think" and just say "I want to experience Canadian culture and life-style.")

 

  • Please tell me about your family's rule if I arrive at Canada.
  • Please tell me about your family's rules? if I arrive at Canada.

 

  • I do my best and study English hard!
  • I want to do my best and study English hard!

 

  • I go to English shcool now but I can't speak well yet.
  • I go to English school now but I can't speak well yet.

 

  • I'm looking forward to meet you, too!!
  • I'm looking forward to meeting you, too!!

 

  • From Miki
  • From Miki

 
Feb 10th 2010 22:21 doubt72

  • At first, I intoroduce myself.
  • At first, I'll introduce myself.

 

  • I'm from Nagoya, Japan but I live in Tokyo alone now.
  • I'm from Nagoya, Japan but I live in Tokyo alone now. [Alone is normal for people your age in America, especially if you've moved away from home, so unnecessary.]

 

  • My family(father, mother and two younger brothers) lives in Aichi(Nagoya).
  • My family (father, mother and two younger brothers) lives in Aichi (Nagoya).

 

  • My job is a rehabilitation therapist (occupational therapist) so I'm working in the Japanese hospital.
  • My job is a rehabilitation therapist (occupational therapist). I work in a Japanese hospital.

 

  • My hobby is cooking, making breads, surfing the internet and snowboarding.
  • My hobby is cooking, making breads, surfing the internet and snowboarding. [surfing the internet? That's not really considered a hobby, any more than reading the newspaper or watching TV might be. Might want to leave that out.]

 

  • Please tell me about your family's rule if I arrive at Canada.
  • Please tell me about your family's rule if I arrive at Canada. [This is kind of a strange sentence. Of course they'd tell you what their habits and customs are when you arrive, possibly something more general would be better, such as: "Is there anything you think I should know before I leave so I can be ready?"]

 
Good luck!
Feb 11th 2010 23:38 mikkiy

Thank you very much for correcting, everyone!!
I sent e-mail and my photo yesterday.
I'm looking forward to studying abroad.^0^
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みなさん、修正ありがとうございます!!
昨日、e-mailと自分の写真を送りました。
私は留学を楽しみにしています。^0^

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