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Snowboarding!

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of mikkiy's latest journal entries Feb 13th 2010 23:06

I went snowboarding yesterday.
I went to Niigata with my coworkers by shinkansen.
It was snowy and cold yesterday.
There were many people because next day is Saturday and the day before yesterday was holiday in Japan.
So yesterday was weekday but it was crowded.

One of my coworkers is good at snowboarding!!
So I was taught by her.
I tried to jumping as well as carving.
I was scared at first but I was gradually used to jumping.
However I got a little carried away.
I fell into valley!! I couldn't climb by myself.><
Then the man who went skiing with his family had helped me.
I thought that I have to be carefule....^-^;
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私は昨日スノーボードに行ってきました。
職場の人と一緒に新幹線で新潟に行きました。
昨日は雪が降ってて寒かったです。
たくさんの人がいました、なぜなら次の日は土曜日で一昨日は日本では祝日でした。
だから、昨日は平日だったけど、混んでいました。

私の職場の同僚の一人はスノーボードが得意です。
だから私は彼女に教えられました。
滑るだけではなく、ジャンプも挑戦しました。
最初は怖かったけど、だんだんジャンプにも慣れました。
だけど、私は調子に乗ってました。
私は谷に落ちてしまいました!!一人では登ることができませんでした。><
その時、家族とスキーに来ていた男の人が私を助けてくれました。
私は注意すべきだったと思いました。。。^-^;
Mar 06th 2010 23:58 aeroplane

  • There were many people because next day is Saturday and the day before yesterday was holiday in Japan.
  • There were many people because the next day is Saturday and the day before yesterday was a holiday in Japan.
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  • So yesterday was weekday but it was crowded.
  • So yesterday was a weekday but it was crowded.
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  • So I was taught by her.
  • So I was taught by her. (try, "She taught me how to snowboard")
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  • I tried to jumping as well as carving.
  • I tried to jumping as well as carving.
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  • I fell into valley!!
  • I fell into a valley!!
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  • I couldn't climb by myself.><
  • I couldn't climb out by myself.><
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  • Then the man who went skiing with his family had helped me.
  • Then a man who went skiing with his family had helped me.
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  • I thought that I have to be carefule....^-^;
  • I thought that I have to be carefule....^-^; (try, "After that, I thought I should be careful")
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Apr 10th 2010 01:27 mikkiy

To aeroplane
Thank you for correcting!!
But I'm sorry to reply late.
I can understand these natural phrases.
They were very good helpful.^0^
Thank you very much!
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修正ありがとうございます!!
でも、返事が遅くなってごめんなさい。
自然な言い回し、分かりました。
とても参考になります。^0^
ありがとう!
mikkiy
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