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"Does not function"

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This is a poem I wrote that I turned into a song, here ya go:

"Does not Function"

Dysfunction! Dysfunction!
There's somethin' wrong with me
look closer look closer
and maybe you can see

"Does not function correctly."
What the hell else am I supposed to do?!
go turn in my disturbed mind
for something pristine and new?

'cuz I'm not like you!

I'm disturbed, my chances at
normality are shot
why do you want me to be
the perfect little girl I'm not?!


to be continued~

Writer's last word:
the last line is actually "the cookie cutter perfection I'm not?"
Nov 14th 2009 07:40 牛juice

^__^)b

I'm not sure dysfunction should be used...I think it turns away from the mood of the powm\lyrics but I like the use of vocabulary here.
Nov 19th 2009 08:46 moji

いい詩ですね♪^^
blondie kittyN3KO!
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