December

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Marie's latest journal entries Dec 26th 2009 23:46
I'll write diaries from December 1st to 5th.
Please correct my English!!

1st
Today is December 1st.
this year will pass soon.
and next year is coming soon.
I only have classes in high school THIS WEEK!

After school,
I was going to go the theater but nothing movie I wanted to watch.
so I went out for dinner with my family.
I ate a full course and a lot of breads.
They were really delicious.
I love them.
I want to eat them again.


3rd
Today classes in my high schoo are over.
I played rubik's cube with my friend at the last class.
It was really fun.
But It was hard.

4th
I went shopping after school.
I bought clothes and two shoes.

5th
I read a lot of magazines because I will go shopping at Sanda outlet tomorrow.
I'm really looking forward to it.

I met my grandmom and my uncle, and had lunch.
I decided to buy a single-lens reflex camera.
I love photography.


Dec 27th 2009 05:52

  • I was going to go the theater but nothing movie I wanted to watch.
  • I was going to go the theater but there was no movie I wanted to watch.

 

  • I ate a full course and a lot of breads.
  • I ate a full course and a lot of bread.

 

  • They were really delicious.
  • It was really delicious. (If you use 'they', it sounds like you are talking about eating your family!! lol >_<)

 

  • I love them.
  • I loved it.

 

  • I want to eat them again.
  • I want to eat it again.

 

  • I played rubik's cube with my friend at the last class.
  • In the last class, I played rubik's cube with my friend.

 

  • I bought clothes and two shoes.
  • I bought clothes and two pairs of shoes.

 

  • I met my grandmom and my uncle, and had lunch.
  • I met my grandmom and my uncle, and we had lunch.

 
your english is very good! :):)
Marie
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