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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Marie's latest journal entries Dec 30th 2009 15:49
I'll write diaries from December 6th to 10th.
Please correct my English!!

6th
I went shopping.
I visited Sanda outlet for a first time.
There were a lot of people.
I bought clothes, cosmetics and a candol.
Those were cheap and cute :)
My father bought pants for me.
Thanks a lot!!!!



7th
The last exam started in my school!

After school,I went to the dentist.
It was far from station.
So I stopped going to there.
I'm going to go to another dentist.
My mom and I ate corokke on my way home.
It was so cheap 50yen and hot.
So it was yammy.

8th
I went to another dentist.
But my mom and I losted way.
So my mom asked a woman how to go there.
She is really really kind.
She took us there.
I appreciate her!

9th
My best friend back to home because of a cold or a flu.
I'm worrying her.
I wish (hope?) she will be better.

10th
A lot of peopl were absent from school.
Usually my class's number is 27people.
But today my class's number is 19people.
Some people catch a cold ,and others catch a ful.
After school, I played the piano and the guitar .

Dec 30th 2009 16:07

  • I visited Sanda outlet for a first time.
  • I visited the Sanda outlet for the first time.

 

  • The last exam started in my school!
  • The last exam finally started in my school! (this phrase sounds more natural)

 

  • It was far from station.
  • It was far from the station.

 

  • It was so cheap 50yen and hot.
  • It was so cheap, only 50yen and hot.

 

  • So it was yammy.
  • So it was yammy. yummy.

 

  • But my mom and I losted way.
  • But my mom and I losted way. got lost

 

  • So my mom asked a woman how to go there.
  • So my mom asked a woman how to get there.

 

  • She is really really kind.
  • SheThe lady was really really kind.

 

  • I appreciate her!
  • I appreciated her!

 

  • My best friend back to home because of a cold or a flu.
  • My best friend is back at home because of a cold or a flu.

 

  • I'm worrying her.
  • I'm worrying about her.

 

  • A lot of peopl were absent from school.
  • A lot of people were absent from school.

 

  • Some people catch a cold ,and others catch a ful.
  • Some people cought a cold ,and others cought a ful.

 
It sounds like you had a lot to do, these past three days. I'm glad you didnt get sick. Please continue to write jouranl entries
Marie
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