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Sep 21st 2009 00:10

It's already half past ten in the evening now. Nevertheless it is still hot here because the campus is located in Guangdong Province, one of the hottest place in China. Frankly, I can barely sleep well during the night due to the high temperature.
The climate here is really changable, for it was typhoon only a few days ago and now is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees! Thank God, the weather forcast says that there will be rain these days and meanwhile the temperature will also reduce by 2-3 degrees.
While the rain is coming in the near future, the sun will still be shining like a burning fire in the tomorrow morning. All I need to do at present is just to wait patiently for the rain while praying. May God bless me !!!

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Sep 21st 2009 03:54 Victoria

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Japanese, Mandarin

Nevertheless it is still hot here because the campus is located in Guangdong Province, one of the hottest place in China.
Nevertheless it is still hot here because the campus is located in Guangdong Province, one of the hottest places in China. (Ex: one of many flavors, one of the hottest trends)

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The climate here is really changable, for it was typhoon only a few days ago and now is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!
The climate here always changes: it was typhoon (season?) only a few days ago and now is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!

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Thank God, the weather forcast says that there will be rain these days and meanwhile the temperature will also reduce by 2-3 degrees.
Thank God, the weather forcast says that there will be rain these days and meanwhile the temperature will also be reduced by 2-3 degrees. (temperature will drop by)

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While the rain is coming in the near future, the sun will still be shining like a burning fire in the tomorrow morning.
While the rain is coming in the near future, the sun will still be shining like a burning fire in the tomorrow morning.

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Red: corrections Blue: suggestions
Some days it is hot here, while during others there is a pleasant colder breeze. This entry was very good.

Sep 23rd 2009 12:11 parker

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French, Japanese

The climate here is really changable, for it was typhoon only a few days ago and now is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!
The climate here always changesable; for it wasThere was a typhoon only a few days ago and now it's already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!

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Sep 25th 2009 18:31 Tealeaf

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Mandarin

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Nevertheless it is still hot here because the campus is located in Guangdong Province, one of the hottest place in China.
Nevertheless, it is still hot here because the campus is located in Guangdong Province, which is one of the hottest places in China.

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Frankly, I can barely sleep well during the night due to the high temperature.
Frankly, I can barely sleep well during the night due to the high temperature. (Both of these words were correct, but the sentence doesn't need them and it sounds better without them.)

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The climate here is really changable, for it was typhoon only a few days ago and now is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!
The climate here is really changable. for There was typhoon only a few days ago and now it is already a sunny day of over 35 degrees!

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Thank God, the weather forcast says that there will be rain these days and meanwhile the temperature will also reduce by 2-3 degrees.
Thank God, the weather forecast says that there will be rain these days soon and meanwhile the temperature will also reduce decrease by 2-3 degrees. ("reduce" is correct, but "decrease" is a little bit more natural.)

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While the rain is coming in the near future, the sun will still be shining like a burning fire in the tomorrow morning.
While the Although rain is coming in the near future, the sun will still be shining like a burning fire in the tomorrow morning.

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All I need to do at present is just to wait patiently for the rain while praying.
All I need to do at present is just to wait patiently for the rain while praying. (You don't need "just" because you've already said "All I need...".)

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