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Lifelong Education Just have to say that your picture is the best ever! I love Sebastian! 我昨天买新的MP3。。。我叫我的新的MP3“Sebastian”,因为我想这个人非常帅!
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Lifelong Education In the US, income increases with the number of degrees you have up to an undergraduate university degree (B.A./B.S.). After that, income...
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vacation I think it is very noble of you to participate in such projects. I hope the environment doesn't do you much harm and may you garner wonde...
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weather Very good! The main corrections are replacing "unnatural" words with more "natural" ones. There weren't really many o...
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Some days it is hot here, while during others there is a pleasant colder breeze. This entry was very ...
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Will that be paper or plast... I think the 'assigned by' part is fine, and overall is very nice. Instead of saying 'second', 'third' etc., you might want to use 'then,'...
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Will that be paper or plast... Nowadays everyone should do more to protect the environment. Hope the corrections still reflect your thoughts.
Just have to say that your picture is the best ever! I love Sebastian! 我昨天买新的MP3。。。我叫我的新的MP3“Sebastian”,因为我想这个人非常帅!
In the US, income increases with the number of degrees you have up to an undergraduate university degree (B.A./B.S.). After that, income...
I think it is very noble of you to participate in such projects. I hope the environment doesn't do you much harm and may you garner wonde...
My mum does the same thing too! However, I'm not a clothing-style buff. In fact, I have zero fashion sense! :)
I like fashion too! Nice job.
Very good! The main corrections are replacing "unnatural" words with more "natural" ones. There weren't really many o...
Red: corrections Blue: suggestions Some days it is hot here, while during others there is a pleasant colder breeze. This entry was very ...
I think the 'assigned by' part is fine, and overall is very nice. Instead of saying 'second', 'third' etc., you might want to use 'then,'...
Nowadays everyone should do more to protect the environment. Hope the corrections still reflect your thoughts.