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Aug 01st 2010 23:55

I want to improve my profile info. I hope you could help me.

About me:
I'm Rose, I'm 26. I joined in lang-8 because a friend said me that could be a good way to practice my writing. I've been correcting some Spanish writings and I need friend to help me with me English.

I study System Engineering, some people think I'm serious but I'm not. I'm actually quite friky and I have a blog diary called "Rational o Irrational"(in spanish).

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Aug 02nd 2010 02:37 Ringer3333

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I want to improve my profile info.
I want to improve update my profile info. (Although improve makes sense here, "update" is the more common word. Just a suggestion.)

I hope you could help me.
I hope you could can help me.

I joined in lang-8 because a friend said me that could be a good way to practice my writing.
I joined in lang-8 because a friend said told me that it could be a good way to practice my writing.

I've been correcting some Spanish writings and I need friend to help me with me English.
I've been correcting some Spanish writings and I need some friends to help me with me English.

I study System Engineering, some people think I'm serious but I'm not.
I study System Engineering. Some people think I'm a serious person but I'm not. (Note: When I first read this, I thought the word "serious" was in reference to how you felt about System Engineering. The word serious in English has a lot of different definitions and it can be a complicated word to use correctly. I have the same problem with "serio" in Spanish.)

I'm actually quite friky and I have a blog diary called "Rational o Irrational"(in spanish).
I'm actually quite friky easy-going and I have a blog diary called "Rational or Irrational"(in Spanish).