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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of erika's latest journal entries Sep 03rd 2009 23:13 haiku
Writing Haiku is fun for me.
I've been writing it for a few years.
Haiku is a very short poem in Japan.
It expresses our feelings in every season.
When I feel someting , I try to write Haiku.
How we feel is the most important when we write Haiku.


I like Summer Holidays
very very much
being relaxed



flowers bloom
as if they promised
each other


Fire works
so beautiful
in the dark


I was sleeping
while seeing
a Korean movie


I can see smiling faces
under woven hats of rush
at Awa-odori


Sep 04th 2009 02:49 Otowatunga
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In English haiku
We stick to five-seven-five
for the syllables.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Haiku
Sep 04th 2009 21:14 erika
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Thank you for your advice here.
Sep 16th 2009 11:53 Syk3
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  • When I feel someting , I try to write Haiku.
  • When I feel something, I try to write a Haiku.
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  • How we feel is the most important when we write Haiku.
  • How we feel is the most important thing when we write Haiku.
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Haiku sounds fun, though I've never written any myself. Regarding the corrections, use "a Haiku" when talking about a specific one, but when talking about writing them in general, just "Haiku" is fine. And don't forget about 5-7-5. Good luck!
Sep 16th 2009 13:20 erika
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Thank you for checking my sentences.
I like writing Haiku but it is sometimes very difficult to put words in 5,7,5 syllables.
I don't know about syllable well.
erika
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