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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of erika's latest journal entries Sep 07th 2009 10:33

I met a lady who had a something grey.
She told us if we touched it ,we would be happier.
So many people wanted to touch it even we had to wait for a while.
There were about three hundred of people.
It has a cute name. And she is very popular among her friends.
They call her "Unae". It is an eel.
She made it using a towel which she bought at one hundred yen shop.
Do you know "Unagi nobori" in Japanese?
It means "rise rapidly".
If you touch "Unae",you will be lucky rapidly.
Actually she has been lucky since she made "Unae".
She can meet many people and talk together.
Now she is an active business person.
If you want to know about "Unae", please visit this site.

http://ameblo.jp/unae

Sep 07th 2009 11:32 RPGcat

  • So many people wanted to touch it even we had to wait for a while.
  • So many people wanted to touch it, we even had to wait for a while.
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  • There were about three hundred of people.
  • There were about three hundred of people (there waiting).
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  • She can meet many people and talk together.
  • (because, )she can meet many people and talk together.
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Unae! interesting website. i've never seen anything like this before
Sep 07th 2009 11:55 erika

Thank you for checking my sentences.
You'll be happy rapidly as you saw Unae.lol
Sep 07th 2009 11:57 RPGcat

i wish that too~ ^ ^
Sep 16th 2009 11:32 Syk3

  • I met a lady who had a something grey.
  • I met a lady who had a something grey.
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  • She told us if we touched it ,we would be happier.
  • She told us if we touched it ,we would be happier.
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  • So many people wanted to touch it even we had to wait for a while.
  • So many people wanted to touch it even we had to wait for a while.
Comment  

  • There were about three hundred of people.
  • There were about three hundred of people there waiting.
Comment  

  • She made it using a towel which she bought at one hundred yen shop.
  • She made it using a towel which she bought at a one hundred yen shop.
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  • Do you know "Unagi nobori" in Japanese?
  • Do you know what "Unagi nobori" means in Japanese?
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  • If you touch "Unae",you will be lucky rapidly.
  • If you touch "Unae," you will soon become lucky rapidly.
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  • Actually she has been lucky since she made "Unae".
  • Actually, she has been lucky since she made "Unae".
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  • If you want to know about "Unae", please visit this site.
  • If you want to know about "Unae," please visit this site.
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ウナエを信じていますか。
Sep 16th 2009 13:41 erika

Dear Syk3 ,
Thank you for your kind rewriting.
I believe in Unae and I'd like to touch her again.
erika
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