7/12 It is the hottest day in Japan now.

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It is hot now.
Accordling to the weather forecast,today's high temparature is 32 degrees celsius in Tokyo.
Today is the hottest day in this summer. I feel like uncomfortable because of the humidity is high too.
In addition,it is rain noon.

Yesterday I watched the DVDs "28 days later" and "28 weeks later " in my room.These are horror films.The story of the movies is zombie virus infections in ENGLAND.The story is exactly alike with Biohazard.
I like to spend the spare time to watch movies.

あついよー
Jul 13th 2008 03:40

  • It is hot now.
  • It is hot now. The temperature is very hot today

 

  • Accordling to the weather forecast,today's high temparature is 32 degrees celsius in Tokyo.
  • According to the weather forecast, today's high temparature temperature is 32 degrees Celsius in Tokyo. (in the US, we use Farenheight, not Celcius - so, in the US, we would have wrote "...todays high temperature will be, or "was" 89.6 degrees!

 

  • Today is the hottest day in this summer.
  • Today is was the hottest day in of this summer.

 

  • I feel like uncomfortable because of the humidity is high too.
  • I feel like very uncomfortable because of the humidity is high too.

 

  • In addition,it is rain noon.
  • In addition, it is rain noon.raining. (also, be sure to put a space between a comma and the next word)

 

  • Yesterday I watched the DVDs "28 days later" and "28 weeks later " in my room.These are horror films.The story of the movies is zombie virus infections in ENGLAND.The story is exactly alike with Biohazard.
  • Yesterday I watched the DVDs "28 days later" and "28 weeks later " in my room.These are horror films.The story of the movies is zombie virus infections in ENGLAND.The story is exactly alike with Biohazard.

 

  • I like to spend the spare time to watch movies.
  • I like to spend the my spare time to watching movies.

 
You are doing GREAT ! all of the corrections are gramatical - which means that I fully understood exactly what you were trying to say without any confusion, but you just did a few very small things incorrectly !
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