play basketball

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today we just have two classes ,Studies the curriculum I like very much,Therefore, my condition is very good.I also felt very strangely, unexpectedly has not slept, because I rested last night very late.
after school ,i decieded to play basketball, ,i like it every much , i am confident in the game ,my shortage can't baffle my loving.I came to
the playground,and found there were only five people were playing.so i
jioned in the game .firstly we just shoot a basket,I found them all were
skillfull. I already was ry long have not played the basketball, because i was very busy recently.so i felt a bit of afraid in my heart .after a while ,They request side the minute to compete,and i agreed.game was begining,the first ball ,we lost.but the competition to start to transform,then ,i found their skill are just so so .At last we won the game ,we all felt tired,but every of us showed up a smile on our face .
I said to myself whatever happend,you must keep composedness
and keep a hanker heart.in this way ,i will make good winning.
Sep 18th 2009 13:52 whlily

please make over for me , thank you .
Sep 18th 2009 14:18

你好!
谢谢你删改我的中文日记。

My English is still poor.
Sorry I can not help to collect your diary.

我们努力学习英文啊!
(和我加油学习中文。。)
Oct 08th 2009 13:38 Hajar

  • today we just have two classes ,Studies the curriculum I like very much,Therefore, my condition is very good.
  • Today, we only had two classes. I like the curriculum very much, and as a result, I was able to perform well.

 

  • I also felt very strangely, unexpectedly has not slept, because I rested last night very late.
  • I also felt strange. I could not sleep because I slept really late last night.

 

  • after school ,i decieded to play basketball, ,i like it every much , i am confident in the game ,my shortage can't baffle my loving.
  • After school, I decided to play basketball. I liked playing it very much. I was confident in the game. My tiredness was unable to keep me away from my love for basketball.

 

  • the playground,and found there were only five people were playing.
  • the playground and found there were only five people playing

 

  • jioned in the game .
  • joined in the game.

 

  • firstly we just shoot a basket,I found them all were
  • Firstly, we shot a basket and I found all of them were skillful.

 

  • skillfull.
  • skillfull

 

  • I already was ry long have not played the basketball, because i was very busy recently.
  • I haven't played basketball for a long time, because I had been very busy recently.

 

  • so i felt a bit of afraid in my heart .
  • So I felt afraid.

 

  • after a while ,They request side the minute to compete,and i agreed.
  • After a while, they asked us to compete, and I agreed.

 

  • game was begining,the first ball ,we lost.
  • The game began. We did not manage to get the ball.

 

  • but the competition to start to transform,then ,i found their skill are just so so .
  • But as the competition progressed further, I found their skills to be mediocre.

 

  • At last we won the game ,we all felt tired,but every of us showed up a smile on our face .
  • At last, we won the game. All of us felt tired, but we had a smile on our faces.

 

  • I said to myself whatever happend,you must keep composedness
  • I said to myself, 'Whatever happens, I must maintain my composure and keep a strong heart'.

 

  • and keep a hanker heart.
  • and keep a hanker heart.

 

  • in this way ,i will make good winning.
  • By doing this, I will emerge victorious.

 
Hey there! I tried my best at correcting your journal entry, based on my understanding. Hope this helps!
whlily
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