My younger sister has a problem about entering university.

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Nowadays, Many high school students have a problem for entering university in korea.

My younger sister also has the same problem.

So, I remembered that I agonized about it.

At that time, I felt down because I screwed up the test.

But, right now, I am happy regardless of the exam.

I wish that my sister will go empty her mind.

Because the Exam is not the only thing in her life.

Anyway, it's cold, today. Hum... No wonder it's cold because of the winter.

Everyone, have a good night :)
Dec 21st 2010 23:13 ErrolKing

  • My younger sister has a problem about entering university.
  • My younger sister has a problem entering in a university.

 

  • Nowadays, Many high school students have a problem for entering university in korea.
  • Nowadays, Many high school students has a problem when entering a university in Korea.

 

  • I wish that my sister will go empty her mind.
  • I wish my sister will go empty her mind.

 
Your English is good!
Dec 21st 2010 23:34 Carrie Park
Thank you very much :)
Dec 22nd 2010 14:36 kleinishere

  • Nowadays, Many high school students have a problem for entering university in korea.
  • Nowadays, many high school students have a problem trying to enter university in Korea.

 

  • So, I remembered that I agonized about it.
  • So, I remembered that I agonized about it.

 

  • I wish that my sister will go empty her mind.
  • I wish that my sister will go empty her mind would go clear her head.

 

  • Because the Exam is not the only thing in her life.
  • Because the exam is not the only thing in her life.

 

  • Anyway, it's cold, today.
  • Anyway, it's cold, today.

 

  • Hum...
  • Hum... Hmm...

 
Hey Carrie!

Great job on the post. I understood your post perfectly.

I made some very particular comments that may be helpful. Some changes that will make you sound like a native English speaker - you're already very close!
Dec 22nd 2010 18:42 Carrie Park
Hi kleinishere :)
Is this your name? Or just ID?
Anyway, Thank you very much !!
This is very helpful to me.
Jan 01st 2011 01:41 kleinishere
You're very welcome.

kleinishere is my ID. Michael is my first name.
Continue with the great work!

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