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I first went to New Zealand when I was 17 years old.

I was really surprised how different it compared to Tokyo, Japan.

There have been so many building and people in Japan, and population and the numbers of buildings are getting more and more.

There are lots of natures in NZ and I really love it.

I want to live there one day since when I was 17 years old.

Last year my friends who I met in NZ when I was 17 came to Japan.

We talked about lots of thing and I said I wanted to live there.

One of my friends said, come to NZ and live, if you want, why you don't do it?

It's not so easy to live in another country for Japanese but his word was right, if I really want to live there, why I don't try to do it??

His word was simple but I was really affected.
Mar 09th 2010 18:38 tomatopotato

  • I was really surprised how different it compared to Tokyo, Japan.
  • I was really surprised how different it was compared to Tokyo, Japan.

 

  • There have been so many building and people in Japan, and population and the numbers of buildings are getting more and more.
  • There are so many buildings and people in Japan, and the population and the numbers of buildings are increasing more and more.

 

  • There are lots of natures in NZ and I really love it.
  • There is a lot of natures in NZ and I really love it.

 

  • I want to live there one day since when I was 17 years old.
  • I've want to live there one day ever since when I was 17 years old.

 

  • We talked about lots of thing and I said I wanted to live there.
  • We talked about lots of things and I said I wanted to live there.

 

  • It's not so easy to live in another country for Japanese but his word was right, if I really want to live there, why I don't try to do it??
  • It's not so easy to live in another country for Japanese but his words were right, if I really want to live there, why don't I try to do it??

 

  • His word was simple but I was really affected.
  • His words were simple but I was really affected.

 
Mar 09th 2010 21:56 Rongotai

Thank you for correcting my mistakes:D

I have a question,
Can I say I've wanted to live there one day ever since when I was 17 years old.
or should I remove ed in this sentence?

Thank you very much :D

Mar 09th 2010 23:04 tomatopotato

Ahh, actually, I made a mistake >.<);

The -ed is necessary, hahah.
But, you don't have to say "one day," because "since I was 17" already includes that meaning. So...

I've wanted to live there ever since when I was 17 years old.

Mar 10th 2010 22:00 Rongotai

Thank you for replying me:D
Now I got it!!
Thank you so much:D
Mar 15th 2010 18:38 tdes

  • There are lots of natures in NZ and I really love it.
  • There’s a lot of beautiful scenery in <st1:country-region w:st="on"><st1:place w:st="on">New Zealand</st1:place></st1:country-region> and I really love it.

 
Mar 15th 2010 21:40 Rongotai

tdes

Thank you :D

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