Disney on Ice

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Last Saturday, I went to the Hiroshima sports Center to watch the show "Disney on Ice" with my son and my wife's father.
My son likes Disney, so I thought he would be happy. But he was so cowardly that he was scared when it got dark in the hall. And he was too young to understand the story of the show.
But anyway he seemed to like the toy that his grandpa bought.
Oct 09th 2009 11:17 polkiujnm

  • Last Saturday, I went to the Hiroshima sports Center to watch the show "Disney on Ice" with my son and my wife's father.
  • Last Saturday, I went to the Hiroshima sports Center to watch the show "Disney on Ice" with my son and my wife's father. (Another (more common) way to refer to your wife's father is "father-in-law.")

 

  • But he was so cowardly that he was scared when it got dark in the hall.
  • But he was so timid that he got scared when it got dark in the hall. ("Cowardly" seems a bit strong when talking about being afraid of the dark.)

 

  • And he was too young to understand the story of the show.
  • He was too young to understand the story of the show. (Don't start sentences with "and.")

 

  • But anyway he seemed to like the toy that his grandpa bought.
  • But anyway, he seemed to like the toy that his grandpa bought (for him).

 
Your English is very good :D
Nice pictures, by the way. Your son is too cute!!!

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