email about lessons
Nov 11th 2009 09:38
If there's any mistakes in here, could you correct them for me?
As a background, I want to take English lessons and tried to make reservations online. I got an email from the company and I want to reply to it. Honestly I don't want to tell them a lot about myself. Because I don't know how much the lessons are. I'm afraid that they might be able to change the lesson's fee higher after they have gotten the information about me. haha.
Here is the email from the company;
Thank you for contacting me about a level check and a sample lesson. Are you able to study in the morning or evening or afternoon? Please tell me about yourself. Do you need English for work or personal use? Have you had any pronunciation training before?
Here is my answer email to the company;
Thank you for the email, and I'm sorry for not replying quickly. I want to study early in the morning or around midnight. I live in Osaka, have skype with web cam, and am eager to improve my English pronunciation with your help. I use English for both work and myself. Maybe there are some information's about lesson's fee on the website, but I couldn't find them. So could you let me know about them beforehand? I have never taken any pronunciation training before, so I'm really looking forward to it.
Best,
Banira
Please be harsh in correcting my English:D
As a background, I want to take English lessons and tried to make reservations online. I got an email from the company and I want to reply to it. Honestly I don't want to tell them a lot about myself. Because I don't know how much the lessons are. I'm afraid that they might be able to change the lesson's fee higher after they have gotten the information about me. haha.
Here is the email from the company;
Thank you for contacting me about a level check and a sample lesson. Are you able to study in the morning or evening or afternoon? Please tell me about yourself. Do you need English for work or personal use? Have you had any pronunciation training before?
Here is my answer email to the company;
Thank you for the email, and I'm sorry for not replying quickly. I want to study early in the morning or around midnight. I live in Osaka, have skype with web cam, and am eager to improve my English pronunciation with your help. I use English for both work and myself. Maybe there are some information's about lesson's fee on the website, but I couldn't find them. So could you let me know about them beforehand? I have never taken any pronunciation training before, so I'm really looking forward to it.
Best,
Banira
Please be harsh in correcting my English:D
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If there are any mistakes in here, could you correct them for me?
I'm afraid that they might be able to make the lesson's fee more expensive after they have gotten the information about me.
I live in Osaka, have skype and a webcam, and am eager to improve my English pronunciation with your help.
I suppose there is information about fees on your website, but I couldn't find any.
So could you please let me know about prices beforehand?
I have never had any pronunciation training before, so I'm really looking forward to it.
Email About Some English Lessons
As a note, I want to take English lessons and tried to make reservations online.
I'm afraid that they might increase the lesson's fee higher after they know more about me.
Here is the email from the company:
Here is my answer email to the company:
Thank you for the email, and I'm sorry for not replying quicker.
Could you let me know what the price of the lessons are?
So could you let me know about them beforehand? (See previous sentence).
-Derek
If there's any mistakes in here, could you correct them for me?Sarahu's correction is technically correct grammar, but native speakers will say that all the time.
The background of this is, I want to take English lessons and tried to make reservations online.
Honestly I don't want to tell them a lot about myself,
because I don't know how much the lessons are.
I'm afraid that they might be able to raise the price after they have gotten my information.
I live in Osaka, have Skype with a webcam, and am eager to improve my English pronunciation with your help.
I use English for both work and personal use.
Could you let me know what the price of your lessons are?I like デレック's idea for this<a href="../../derek">.</a><a href="../../derek"></a>
Email about English lessons（全部大文字にすると、論文のタイトルとかのような雰囲気だ。）
It does not sound like this company is asking for much personal information. They only want a few specific pieces of information to know what you would need to learn.
1. Are you able to study in the morning or evening or afternoon?
This question is just to see if you can find a time that lessons will work for both of you.
"Please tell me about yourself." This statement is not really a specific request for information. It is just an introduction to the next two questions. You don't have to say anything in reply to it. You could offer almost any information in reply if you want to, but it is not required.
2. Do you need English for work or personal use?
This question is to determine the level of formality you need. They probably teach different things if people want just one of them.
3. Have you had any pronunciation training before?
This question is to determine how much experience you have. It gives them an idea of what level your lessons would start at.
I hope you are able to find lessons that will teach you what you want to know.
an email about lessons
If there are any mistakes in here, could you correct them for me?
As a background, I want to take English lessons and tried to make reservations online.
I'm afraid that they might be able to increase the lesson's fee higher after they have gotten the information about me.
I live in Osaka, I have skype with a web cam, and I am eager to improve my English pronunciation with your help.
I use English for both work and personal reasons.
Maybe there is some information's about your lesson's fee on the website, but I couldn't find it.
I have never taken any pronunciation training before, so I'm really looking forward to it.