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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of banira's latest journal entries May 03rd 2011 12:52
Janice,
 

Thank you very much for your kind response. I am glad that you seem OK and are well prepared to Good Samaritan hospital’s alumni event. 元気そうで、また同窓会の準備も順調そうで何よりです。

I prefer this email address. I check more often than the other one. Both are available, although. 一応両方使えるけどね。Sorry about late response and I’m really sorry that I myself don’t know their email address that you really want to know. Here is my idea: Japanese Boston company has their branches all over Japan. So they might be able to get their email address. I’m afraid that it might not be in time this coming HRS in Sanfransisco but you’ll definitely get them in the end and might use them next year. 今年は間に合わないかもしれないけど、確実にメールアドレス、get出来ると思うし、来年使えるといいし。I believe that Keiko Usui is the perfect person to manage this kind of problem, and I let her know. 彼女に連絡しました。
 
I hope that I will see you Boston next year. Please say my best regards to everyone. みなさんによろしくお伝えください。

Best regards,
May 03rd 2011 18:30 freshbread3

  • Janice,
  • Dear Janice, (Not necessary if this is an informal letter with a close friend)

 

  • I am glad that you seem OK and are well prepared to Good Samaritan hospital’s alumni event.
  • I am glad that you seem OK and are well prepared for the Good Samaritan hospital’s alumni event. [... and seem to be well prepared for the upcoming alumni event at the Good Samaritan hospital.]

 

  • I check more often than the other one.
  • I check it more often than the other one.

 

  • Both are available, although.
  • Both are available, although. [Either are fine to use, though.]

 

  • Sorry about late response and I’m really sorry that I myself don’t know their email address that you really want to know.
  • Sorry about the late response and I’m really sorry that I myself don’t know their email address that you really want to know. [I'm sorry about the late response and I'm also really sorry that I don't have the email address that you're looking for.]

 

  • Here is my idea: Japanese Boston company has their branches all over Japan.
  • Here is an idea: the Japanese Boston company has their branches all over Japan.

 

  • I’m afraid that it might not be in time this coming HRS in Sanfransisco but you’ll definitely get them in the end and might use them next year.
  • I’m afraid that it might not be in time for this coming HRS in San Fransisco but you’ll definitely get them in the end and might use them next year.

 

  • I believe that Keiko Usui is the perfect person to manage this kind of problem, and I let her know.
  • I believe that Keiko Usui is the perfect person to manage this kind of problem, and I'll let her know.

 

  • I hope that I will see you Boston next year.
  • I hope that I will see you in Boston next year.

 

  • Please say my best regards to everyone.
  • Please give my (best) regards to everyone. (We don't usually say "best regards." Usually we just say, "Give my regards to everyone.")

 
good luck
May 04th 2011 18:33 Takoyaki

  • Both are available, although.
  • Both are available, however. ("Although" implies a condition that follows. Example: Although we were tired, we still went to the party.)

 

  • Best regards,
  • Sincerely, (Just my opinion, but since you said "best regards" in the previous sentence, it felt a little awkward to me to repeat it as your closing to the letter.)

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May 06th 2011 01:55 cuavsfan

  • Both are available, although.
  • I do still use both, although.

 

  • I’m afraid that it might not be in time this coming HRS in Sanfransisco but you’ll definitely get them in the end and might use them next year.
  • I’m afraid that it might not be in time for this coming HRS in San Fransisco, but you’ll definitely get them in the end and might be able to use them next year.

 
Looks like a good letter.

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