Is it a true English? → "cleaning the world by social"

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Hey guys! I have no confident about my English. lol

Is it a true English?
"cleaning the world by social"

It's a logo of a new social networking service for pick up rubbishes all over the world.

Please help us!
Apr 14th 2011 18:55 beppu

  • I have no confident about my English.
  • I have no confidence in my English.

 

  • Is it a true English?
  • Is this English correct?

 

  • It's a logo of a new social networking service for pick up rubbishes all over the world.
  • It's a logo for a new social networking service for pick up rubbish all over the world.

 
たぶん、「cleaning the world socially」の方が良いと思います。
Apr 14th 2011 19:19 fujio
ありがとうございます!
Apr 14th 2011 18:58 mari36

'By social' doesn't make sense; you could say 'through social networking' (I guess that's what you mean).
Apr 14th 2011 19:19 fujio
Thank you so much!!
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