Thought in Autumn

PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of bai bro's latest journal entries Oct 11th 2009 12:15
its sunday today, i had rested at home, but my friends for their working left me at home.i was angry.
i walked nearby the windows and opened i found what a beautiful day!
outside really nice ,blue sky, cool windy and fresh air ,and gloden leaves, i like the gloden autumn bring me more mood.
even if , i didnt still move my step anymore,and keep me into myself room. just because one didnt to do anything,hoped to keep calm for having one day. in the end i yet afraided staying one at home , as usual i always so contravent.... but sure i was not mad.heee! just there were many doubts cant be solved confused my hreat . for example ,finanical crisis led to a large range of harm to the world, therefore in china ,
it is very hard to find a job either. how to plan our career in future
without correct guideline.it would be biggest question all the world.
Oct 11th 2009 21:09 izzy ♫

  • its sunday today, i had rested at home, but my friends for their working left me at home.
  • Its sunday today, I had a rested at home, but because my friends for their working left me at home for work.

 

  • i was angry.
  • I was angry at them.

 

  • i walked nearby the windows and opened i found what a beautiful day!
  • I walked nearby went to open the windows and opened i found what out that it was a beautiful day outside!

 

  • outside really nice ,blue sky, cool windy and fresh air ,and gloden leaves, i like the gloden autumn bring me more mood.
  • The view outside was really nice. ,blue sky, cool windy the wind was cooling,and the air was fresh air, and the leaves were golden leaves,. I like the golden autumn bring me more moodas it uplifts my spirits.

 

  • even if , i didnt still move my step anymore,and keep me into myself room.
  • Even if so, I still didn't still move my step anymore,and keep me into confined myself in my room.

 

  • just because one didnt to do anything,hoped to keep calm for having one day.
  • just because one didnt to do anything,hoped to keep calm for having one day. (sorry I do not really understand this, can't help you :P)

 

  • in the end i yet afraided staying one at home , as usual i always so contravent....
  • in the end i yYet I was afraided of staying one alone at home, as usual i always so contravent.... (by the way is there such a word as "contravent"??)

 

  • but sure i was not mad.
  • but sure i I was not mad. (Doesn't this sentence contradict the sentence which mentioned that you were angry with your friends?)

 

  • just there were many doubts cant be solved confused my hreat .
  • just tThere were many doubts that can't be solved confused my hreat .

 

  • for example ,finanical crisis led to a large range of harm to the world, therefore in china ,
  • For example, the finanical crisis led to a large range of harm to severely impacted the world,. therefore iIn china,

 

  • it is very hard to find a job either.
  • it is very hard to find a job either.

 

  • how to plan our career in future
  • How to do we plan our career in future

 

  • without correct guideline.
  • without the correct guidelines. (what guidelines?)

 

  • it would be biggest question all the world.
  • it would be biggest question all in the world.

 
SORRY! 我已经尽力而为了。有一些句子我不是很了解你想表达什么。所以如果修改之后的句子的意思变了,请多多原谅!:(

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