tony

• Every morning, a lot of flesh vegetables was birthed.
• Every morning, there are a lot of fresh vegetables. [One speaks of growing plants, but one does not speak of plants being born ("birthed" is not a word). "Fresh" and "flesh" are two different words. Fresh = 新鮮; flesh = 肉, 肉体.]

Pat123
Heat and temperature are two different things. That is why you can reach into a 350 degree (F) oven without burning you hand, if you don't touch anything, but will burn you hand if you put it in 200 degree (F) water. The situation wh...

tony

• Plus 14papers in the last year's the Professor's class.
• Plus 14 papers/assignments in the Professor's class last year. [Alternative: "... in the class the Professor taught last year." Note: In English, there almost always has to be a blank space typed between a number and the word that follows.]

tony

• Today I prayed tennis with my friends.
• Today I played tennis with my friends. [Note: pray = 祈る, play = 遊ぶ, (ゲームを)する. I know it's hard for Japanese speakers to hear the difference.]

biru

• by the way,Man ray exhibition on museum on THE NATIONAL ART CENTER, TOKYO!
• By the way, the Man Ray museum exhibition is on now at THE NATIONAL ART CENTER in TOKYO! ["is on" is a phrase to say it is happening now. Eg. The game is on now.]

biru

• have a good night and day.
• Have a good night and day. [Have a good day = good all day.]

Pat123

• Because of good nervousness make students be concentrated.
• Because of good nervousness Tension makes students be concentrated more. Comment: "Tension" refers to the pressure that monitoring generates. Not all students become nervous. Others are just stimulated to do better, much as an athlete is stimulated to do better by cheering fans.

Pat123

• It is important for students to be checked all time by the teacher.
• It is important for students to be checked all the time by the teacher. Comment: "checked all the time " is OK, but I think a better choice is "monitored."

Pat123

• I wish I'll write in English journal everyday on lang8 :)
• I wish want to I'll write in an English journal entry every day on lang8 :) Comment: "Want" is more definite and positive than "wish." It implies an intent, rather than just a desire.

梟の微笑み
As a nonnative speaker, sorry for cann't offer a correction. So just comments. We have TANABATA in China,too. But we celebrate the Day by lunar calendar which is maybe called '旧暦'　in Japan. This day is called the Valentine's Day o...