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Beau told me to go to beach after church on the Sunday so I wore contact lenses after a long time. But there were a lot of clouds in sky that looked like rain. I guessed that we don’t go to beach today. After finished church, we had morning tea time. We talked about what we are doing after then. We decided to play some card games in joe’s place.
First of all, we would have to solve to lunch. Then Joe suggested us to cook spaghetti for us and I told them to cook desert. We went to Joe’s place after finish shopping.
We ended to cook and started eating spaghetti. Spaghetti was delicious. But we cooked spaghetti a lot. My stomach was crying while I was eating my dish. We agreed what we cook a lot of spaghetti. Then we started a card game. But I have never played the card game in Korea. when I was getting rule of the game, the game was ended. I was at the bottom of the game. The next we played another game. The game was painful. The game used words and got score like crosswords-puzzle. Of course, I had my electronic dictionary. However that was turned off soon because I didn’t charge. Fortunately the game was played two people are one team. I was hardly any help for my team mate.
But us team won!!! My team mate was hero~!!!
Sep 21st 2010 03:52 Cristo_크리스토

  • Beau told me to go to beach after church on the Sunday so I wore contact lenses after a long time.
  • Beau told me to go to beach after church on the Sunday so I wore contact lenses after a long time.

 

  • But there were a lot of clouds in sky that looked like rain.
  • But there were a lot of clouds in the sky that looked like rain.

 

  • I guessed that we don’t go to beach today.
  • I guessed that we don’t wouldn't go to the beach that day today.You are telling a story, so it is past tense. You can use present tense when repeating past thoughts: I guessed: 'We don't go to the beach today'.

 

  • After finished church, we had morning tea time.
  • After we finished church, we had morning tea time.Or: After finishing church, we had morning tea time.

 

  • We talked about what we are doing after then.
  • We talked about what we would do after that are doing after then.

 

  • We decided to play some card games in joe’s place.
  • We decided to play some card games in joe’s Joe's place.

 

  • First of all, we would have to solve to lunch.
  • First of all, we would have to solve to lunch.Or perhaps you wanted to say: First of all, we had to solve the question what to eat for lunch.

 

  • Then Joe suggested us to cook spaghetti for us and I told them to cook desert.
  • Then Joe suggested us to cook spaghetti for us and I told them to cook desert.

 

  • We went to Joe’s place after finish shopping.
  • We went to Joe’s place after finishing/we finished shopping.

 

  • We ended to cook and started eating spaghetti.
  • We ended finished cooking to cook and started eating spaghetti.

 

  • Spaghetti was delicious.
  • (The) Spaghetti was delicious.

 

  • We agreed what we cook a lot of spaghetti.
  • We agreed what we would cook a lot of spaghetti.

 

  • But I have never played the card game in Korea.
  • But I have never played the that card game in Korea.

 

  • when I was getting rule of the game, the game was ended.
  • when I was getting rule of the game finally, the game was already over ended.Your sentence was correct but in this way you emphasize that it took a long time (the whole game) to learn the rules. And just at the moment you got them, you finished playing the game.

 

  • I was at the bottom of the game.
  • I was at the bottom of the game. I'm sorry, I'm not a native English speaker, so I don't know the good expression for this^^;

 

  • The next we played another game.
  • The next Then we played another game.

 

  • The game used words and got score like crosswords-puzzle.
  • The game used words and got scores like crosswords-puzzles.Usually when making a general statement, it is not singular but plural.

 

  • Fortunately the game was played two people are one team.
  • Fortunately the game was played with two people in are one team.

 

  • But us team won!!!
  • But us our team won!!!

 

  • My team mate was hero~!!!
  • My team mate was a hero~!!!

 
Sep 28th 2010 11:58 Ji

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