Describing the bar chart
Feb 08th 2010 21:41
According to bars relating to men the most amount of spare time is spent by unemployed and retired subjects (just over 80 hours per week).Whereas males who have full time job spend just under 50 hours per week on their leisure activities.
Turning to (As for?) figures relating to females, women who don't work (for two cases such as unemployment and retirement) have significantly more free time (more than 70 hours per week) than those who have job.
For employed females numbers are following: who have full time job - just under 40 hours every week on average, part time job - 40 hours per week.
As we can see men as part-time employees and househusbands were not among respondents, so we can't say how much leisure time they have. As for housewives, they spend about 50 hours per week on average on their leisure.
Overall, in general men spent remarkably more time on their leisure activities than women according to data from 1998-1999.
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Describing the Bar ChartWhen you're writing a title of an article, usually you want to capitalize everything except for articles (the, a, an, etc.)
This bar chart illustrates how much time males and females spend on their leisure over a typical week in 1998-1999.
According to bars relating to men the most amount of spare time is spent by unemployed and retired subjects (just over 80 hours per week).While this is correct, I'd say something like - "According to the chart, unemployed and retired men spend the most leisure time (just over 80 hours per week)."
Whereas males who have afull time job spend just under 50 fiftyhours per week on their leisure activities.If it's a formal or semi-formal writing, you want to use the written names of numbers, not actual numbers.
Turning to (As for?) As for figures relating to females, women who don't work (for two cases such as unemployment and retirement) have significantly more free time (more than 70 seventyhours per week) than those who have ajob.
For employed females numbers are the following: Thosewho have a full time job - just under 40 hours per week on average, and for those with a part time job - 40 hours per week.
As we can see men as part-time employees and househusbands(We say "Stay at home dads" :))were not among respondents, so we can't say how much leisure time they have.
As for housewives, they spend about 50 hours per week on average on their leisure.
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