Going back to my hometown.
Sep 24th 2008 23:12
As I finished the first semester test, I went to Tokyo and my home town, Mie prefecture.
First I flew to Tokyo from Fukuoka airport and stayed my sister's place for a week.
I enjoyed shopping, sight seeing and meeting with my friends in Tokyo.
Then I went to Mie by highway bus.
I couldn't sleep at all, but it cost just 5000 yen.
In Mie, I visited my grand parents and my friends.
I stayed there for 3 days and went back to Kyushu from Osaka
by ferry.
In the ferry, there were many Korean torists.
One of the korean spoke to me to teach some Japanese.
I taught her some Japanese and she taught me some Korean.
It was good experience for me.
First I flew to Tokyo from Fukuoka airport and stayed my sister's place for a week.
I enjoyed shopping, sight seeing and meeting with my friends in Tokyo.
Then I went to Mie by highway bus.
I couldn't sleep at all, but it cost just 5000 yen.
In Mie, I visited my grand parents and my friends.
I stayed there for 3 days and went back to Kyushu from Osaka
by ferry.
In the ferry, there were many Korean torists.
One of the korean spoke to me to teach some Japanese.
I taught her some Japanese and she taught me some Korean.
It was good experience for me.
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Mar 20th 2009 15:02
Brad
間違いは些細な間違いでした！
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- As I finished the first semester test, I went to Tokyo and my home town, Mie prefecture.
- After I finished the first semester test, I went to Tokyo and my home town, Mie prefecture. (三重県は町じゃないですか？そうなら、"home prefecture" ということを使います)
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- I enjoyed shopping, sight seeing and meeting with my friends in Tokyo.
- I enjoyed shopping, sight seeing, and meeting with my friends in Tokyo.
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- I couldn't sleep at all, but it cost just 5000 yen.
- I couldn't sleep at all, but it cost just 5000 yen. (この文はバスで寝る事と切符の値段は関係が分かりませんでしたから："I couldn't sleep at all on the bus. The Ticket cost just 5,000 yen." の方がいいと思います。
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- In Mie, I visited my grand parents and my friends.
- In Mie, I visited my grandparents and my friends.
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- I stayed there for 3 days and went back to Kyushu from Osaka
- I stayed there for 3 days and went back to Kyushu from Osaka by ferry. (この文の文法は正しいです。もし数を書いたら少数は言葉の様に書きます。それから "three" を使います。)
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- In the ferry, there were many Korean torists.
- On the ferry, there were many Korean tourists.
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- One of the korean spoke to me to teach some Japanese.
- One of the Koreans asked me to teach him/her Japanese. その人は女の人ですか？男の人ですか？
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