Sorrow night

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Tonight, I heard that one of my best friends passed out for motorcycle accident.

When I heard that news, uncontrolledly, I burst into tears... Even though I've only known her for three years, she had already taken an enormous part of my heart. Undoubtedly, She was a thoughtful and considerate girl. I'd like to share my secret and vexation with her, and she could always keep it, don't spill it, and give me the best recommendation and feedback.

This the first time I faced the fact that some people who are really close tome passed out. To be honest, I don't know how to deal with this emotion very well. Tow weeks ago, my ESL teacher lost his wife due to acute cancer.However, he could talk about his wife's death easily. It's hard for me to imagine how he did it. I think I'm supposed to have more time to accept this truth...

Mourn for my friend.
Feb 18th 2010 22:58 darkhonour

  • Tonight, I heard that one of my best friends passed out for motorcycle accident.
  • Tonight, I heard that one of my best friends passed out away for motorcycle accident. -> pass out: to faint or loss consciousness; pass away: to depart from this world

 

  • When I heard that news, uncontrolledly, I burst into tears...
  • When I heard that news, uncontrolledly, I burst into tears uncontrollably...

 

  • Even though I've only known her for three years, she had already taken an enormous part of my heart.
  • Even though I've only known her for three years, she has already taken an enormous part of my heart. -> OR '....she has already filled an important/special place in my heart.'

 

  • I'd like to share my secret and vexation with her, and she could always keep it, don't spill it, and give me the best recommendation and feedback.
  • I'd like to share my secrets and vexation (OR frustrations) with her, and she could always keep it don't without spilling it, and give me the best recommendation (OR advice) and feedback.

 

  • This the first time I faced the fact that some people who are really close tome passed out.
  • This is the first time I faced the fact that some people who are really close to me passed out away.

 

  • Tow weeks ago, my ESL teacher lost his wife due to acute cancer.
  • Two weeks ago, my ESL teacher lost his wife due to acute cancer.

 

  • I think I'm supposed to have more time to accept this truth...
  • I think I'm supposed to have more time to accept this truth... -> I would say, 'I think I'll need more time to accept the truth.'

 
My condolences.

Time heals all wounds so don't be too hard on yourself. I'm sure your late friend would like you to move on too. :)
Mar 02nd 2010 07:34 Wei

Thank you for your comfort and correction. : )
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