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I don't have computer to used at the office today. The monitor was break. I hope I can fix it tomorrow.
Nov 16th 2011 03:13 Marin

  • I don't have computer to used at the office today.
  • I don't have a computer to used at the office today.

 

  • The monitor was break.
  • The monitor was break is broken.

 
Nov 16th 2011 03:16 N : ♥ : O : ♥ : Y
Dear Marin,

Thank you for correcting my journal entry.
Good night from Thailand
Nov 16th 2011 03:17 N : ♥ : O : ♥ : Y
I don't have a computer to use at the office today. The monitor is broken.
Nov 16th 2011 03:20 Marin
Good afternoon from the US! :-) Marin
Nov 16th 2011 03:30 N : ♥ : O : ♥ : Y
Good afternoon Us
Nov 16th 2011 03:31 James

  • I don't have computer to used at the office today.
  • I didn't have a computer to use at the office today OR I couldn't use my computer at the office today.

 

  • The monitor was break.
  • The monitor was broken.

 

  • I hope I can fix it tomorrow.
  • I hope I can get it fixed tomorrow.

 
I changed "don't" to "didn't" because I'm guessing that you are back home now, after work. If you were visiting Lang-8.com from your work, then you would have a computer, so your statement would be untrue. ^^

I'm also guessing that you will ask someone else to fix your computer, instead of trying to fix it yourself. If you could fix it yourself, you would already have fixed it today. ^^
Nov 16th 2011 03:38 N : ♥ : O : ♥ : Y
Dear Jame,

I am going to bed. Thank you for your corrections. I tried to fix it by mind self for a while but it not work I took some part out by screwdiver. I afaid it will be more broken then I stopped to do it. I hope we can fix without bying a new one.

I will come to correct my journal again tomorrow. Now! Good night James.

Bye Byeeee zZzz

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