To create art work

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Centering on my sense of values.
The mind of the person who touches the work is valued.
And, i am acting free and happily.
Oct 22nd 2009 10:50 Liren

  • Centering on my sense of values.
  • This is not a complete sentence. Perhaps you meant for the title and the first sentence to be combined? (which, by the way, also wouldn't be a complete sentence) A complete sentence needs a subject and a verb. So it could be, for example, "I want to create art work centering on my sense of values."

 

  • And, i am acting free and happily.
  • And, I am acting free and happily. Don't start a sentence with the word "and."

 
Oct 27th 2009 12:40 nirvanest

Liren>Thanx!
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