The Moments

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The moments clinging to a small thing and getting away from it have always fascinated me.
It's like the difference between short-sightedness and being wise.



I have to do something now, so I cannot write much longer. It is a really pathetic excuse. This is a kind of poem but I need to write practical things in order to prepare for my tests. I will !

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(영어와 한국어가 같지 않아요. 한글로 쓰고 나서 영어를 쓰려나 한국어 뜻은 훨씬 복잡하고 큰데 그걸 표현할 만한 영어 실력이 아직까지는 없네요. ㅜㅠ; 실용적인 글을 써야 하는 상황인데 자꾸 다른 글을 쓰고 있네요. 아~~~ 곧, 시험 준비용으로 뭔가 써서 올릴께요. 많이 도와주세요~)

작은 일에도 온통 마음이 사로잡혀 오직 하나만 보이는 순간.
또한 마법처럼 거기서 헤어나오는 순간.
두 순간은 참으로 오묘하게 매력적이다.
근시안과 해안의 차이처럼?
May 03rd 2010 22:54 hwan

  • The moments clinging to a small thing and getting out of it have always fascinated me.
  • The moments clinging to a small thing and getting out of it have always fascinated me. you might want to rewrite the part in blue - maybe getting away from it would be better, but still it's not quite poetic.

 

  • It's like differences between short-sighted and wise.
  • It's like the difference(s) between short-sighted and wise.

 

  • It is really pathetic excuses.
  • It's a really pathetic excuse. (only 1)

 
I hope you find the time to keep writing poems.
We can't spend all our time working and taking tests, etc.
I look forward to reading more poetry from you when you have the time!
May 04th 2010 00:55 Julia.Jin

Hwan(환), thanks a lot.
I like using twitter so I can post a short writing which is poems or just notes. I don't know it is worth but I keep writing. I will try to write more poetry. I am very happy to read your comment. ^0^
May 04th 2010 13:21 maeniwyn

  • It's like the difference between short-sighted and wise.
  • It's like the difference between short-sightedness and becoming/beingwise.

 

  • I have to do something now, so I could not get around to writing longer.
  • I have to do something now, so I cannot write much longer.

 

  • This is a kind of poem but I need to write practical things in order to prepare my tests.
  • This is a kind of poem but I need to write practical things in order to prepare formy tests.

 
Even though I don't read Korean and so I cannot read your poems, I hope you continue to write your poetry, as well. =)
May 05th 2010 07:42 Julia.Jin

Hi, Helen (maeniwyn)
How are you? Thanks for corrections.
"The moments clinging ~~being wise."
This is actually my poem. hahaha I know it is not a nomal form. I will try to keep writing it. See ya.
May 05th 2010 11:25 maeniwyn

Annyeong! I am good, Julia. =) Thank you for asking. I only have two weeks of classes left. I am quite stressed out. I need to finish everything earlier than everyone else, because I need to leave early to go to my brother's graduation from UC Berkeley. How are you?
May 06th 2010 17:06 Julia.Jin

Helen (maeniwyn), Hello
I am so far so good. I hope it'll all balance out in the end. When you go to your brother's gradution, please take pictures and let me see it. ^0^ I never have seen UC Berkeley before. Stay cool~! ^0^


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