The traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause murder casese or fierce fights. Part 2

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The traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause murder casese or fierce fights. Part 2

The black car started to move again, when the traffic light chaned to green. I tired to go ahead, and disappear from their views. But the driver didn't let me go. The driver was a gangster. He was probably with some his friends, but the glasses of his car were very dark, so I didn't see the inside his car. The gangster drove his car zigzag not to let me go. There was a very long bridge ahead. But the car just went ahead slowly. The driver oponed the window, and begun to throw empty cans, it didn't hit me. But I got suepr angry, however, I was afraid of this critical situation, because I was alone but on ther other hand, they were some people. I had no chance if I had to fight against them.

It was late at night. there were only a few cars, sometimes other cars passed us, but they didn't care. Nobody wanted to get involved such a troublesome accident.

There was my home town in the opposite shore, I was very familier with the town. There were many flats there, and the each flat estate has some steel or big stone objects not to let cars go in, but motorcycles can still go in, because they still have some spaces.

So I decided to go there to escape, and endured their nasty behaviors to me until I cross the bridge.

When we crossed the brigdge, there was a big intersection, the traffic light was bule. But the black car waited for me at the middle of the intersection to chase me. So I quickly turned left and, I rushed to the flat estimate, it took around 5km away from there.

The engine reved up, up to red zone. My home town was down town, so there were many old houses, buildings and allies. Sometimes I looked at a side mirror, the car still chased me desperately. It was very dark, but I saw their head light clearly. I was also super desperate. If I had been cought, I would have been killed or beated up by them. So at the moment, my diriving technic was slightly better than Nicolas Terol(Moto GP driver). I run through small allies, and several corners and intersections.
The black car chased me, it was around 300m behind me. It was very dengarous car chase. If someone had suddenly come up in front of me, I would have hit someone with my motocycle, because I run through small allies at around 100km. But I finally saw the entrance of the flat. There were big steel pipes not to let cars go inside.
I was super happy, I almost peed in my pants. And then, stupid gangstars came, but I already inside the site. I knew that there were many exits insde the site, but the black car could not go in, so I raised a shout of vitcory lol

To be continued.......
May 15th 2011 17:55 nextlevel

I read the diary just like watching movie.
It really depends on thread.
is it a happy ending XD
May 17th 2011 01:25 Tomo-Taro
This story also has happy ending, so you will see on next journal.
May 17th 2011 00:05 デレック

  • The traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause murder casese or fierce fights. Part 2
  • Traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause deaths or fierce fights. (Part 2)

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  • The traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause murder casese or fierce fights.
  • Traffic troubles in Japan sometimes cause death or fierce fights.

 

  • The black car started to move again, when the traffic light chaned to green.
  • A black car started to move when the traffic light changed to green.

 

  • I tired to go ahead, and disappear from their views.
  • I tired to pass them, and disappear from their sight.

 

  • But the driver didn't let me go.
  • But the driver was blocking me.

 

  • He was probably with some his friends, but the glasses of his car were very dark, so I didn't see the inside his car.
  • He was probably with some friends, but the glass of his car were tinted, so I couldn't see the inside of his car.

 

  • The gangster drove his car zigzag not to let me go.
  • The gangster was cutting me off by zigzagging across the road to make sure I couldn't go.

 

  • There was a very long bridge ahead.
  • There was a very long bridge ahead, but he decided to drive really slowly.

 

  • But the car just went ahead slowly.
  • But the car just went ahead slowly.

 

  • The driver oponed the window, and begun to throw empty cans, it didn't hit me.
  • The driver opened the window, and began to throw empty cans which didn't hit me.

 

  • But I got suepr angry, however, I was afraid of this critical situation, because I was alone but on ther other hand, they were some people.
  • But I got super angry, however, I was afraid of this situation, because I was alone and they had a lot more people on their side of the fight.

 

  • there were only a few cars, sometimes other cars passed us, but they didn't care.
  • There were only a few cars, sometimes other cars passed us, but they didn't care.

 

  • Nobody wanted to get involved such a troublesome accident.
  • Nobody wanted to get involved in such a troublesome accident.

 

  • There was my home town in the opposite shore, I was very familier with the town.
  • My home town was just across from the shore, so I was very familiar with the town.

 

  • There were many flats there, and the each flat estate has some steel or big stone objects not to let cars go in, but motorcycles can still go in, because they still have some spaces.
  • There were many apartments there, and each apartment has some steel or big stone objects not letting cars go in, but motorcycles can still go in because they still have some small spaces.

 

  • When we crossed the brigdge, there was a big intersection, the traffic light was bule.
  • When we crossed the bridge, there was a big intersection, the traffic light was green.

 

  • But the black car waited for me at the middle of the intersection to chase me.
  • But the black car waited to chase me.

 

  • So I quickly turned left and, I rushed to the flat estimate, it took around 5km away from there.
  • So I quickly turned left and, I rushed to the apartment complex, which was around 5km away from there.

 

  • The engine reved up, up to red zone.
  • The engine revved up, up to the red zone on my odometer.

 

  • Sometimes I looked at a side mirror, the car still chased me desperately.
  • Sometimes I looked at a side mirror, the car still was chasing me desperately.

 

  • If I had been cought, I would have been killed or beated up by them.
  • If I had been caught, I would have been killed or beaten up by them.

 

  • And then, stupid gangstars came, but I already inside the site.
  • And then, the stupid gangsters came, but I already was inside the site.

 
やばい、気をつけてね
May 17th 2011 01:24 Tomo-Taro
Yea, it was super dangerous, but I managed to escape !!
May 17th 2011 01:42 Tomo-Taro
Yea, it was super dangerous, but I managed to escape !!
May 17th 2011 00:50

  • The black car started to move again, when the traffic light chaned to green.
  • The black car started to move again when the traffic light changed to green

 

  • I tired to go ahead, and disappear from their views.
  • I was too tired to go ahead with the chase and tried to disappear from their views. 自分なりに添削しました・・・・

 

  • He was probably with some his friends, but the glasses of his car were very dark, so I didn't see the inside his car.
  • He was probably with some his friends, but the car windows were tinted so I didn't (couldn't) see the inside of his car. または couldn't see inside the car

 

  • The gangster drove his car zigzag not to let me go.
  • The gangster drove his car in a zigzag manner and refused to let me go. (give way)

 

  • The driver oponed the window, and begun to throw empty cans, it didn't hit me.
  • The driver rolled/wound down the window, and begun to throw empty cans. Fortunately, they didn't hit me. *wound is the past tense of wind

 

  • But I got suepr angry, however, I was afraid of this critical situation, because I was alone but on ther other hand, they were some people.
  • Though I got super angry, However, I was afraid of this critical (dangerous is a better word) situation because I was alone but on the other hand, they were in a group. 簡単に "I was outnumbered."Okです。

 

  • I had no chance if I had to fight against them.
  • I had no chance of winning if I had to fight against them. または I didn't stand a chance against them.

 

  • Nobody wanted to get involved such a troublesome accident.
  • Nobody wanted to get involved in such a troublesome accident.

 

  • There was my home town in the opposite shore, I was very familier with the town.
  • There was my home town on the opposite shore. (my hometown was located on the opposite shore)

 

  • There were many flats there, and the each flat estate has some steel or big stone objects not to let cars go in, but motorcycles can still go in, because they still have some spaces.
  • There were many apartments there, and the each apartment had some steel or stone structures to restrict vehicles from entering, but motorcycles could still go in because they still have some spaces.

 

  • So I decided to go there to escape, and endured their nasty behaviors to me until I cross the bridge.
  • So I decided to escape there, and endured their nasty behaviors (to me) until I crossed the bridge.

 

  • When we crossed the brigdge, there was a big intersection, the traffic light was bule.
  • When we crossed the bridge, there was a big intersection. The traffic light was (showing) blue.

 

  • So I quickly turned left and, I rushed to the flat estimate, it took around 5km away from there.
  • So I quickly turned left and rushed to the nearest block. it was around 5km away from there.

 

  • Sometimes I looked at a side mirror, the car still chased me desperately.
  • I looked at the side view mirrors and saw that the car was still chasing me desperately.

 

  • It was very dark, but I saw their head light clearly.
  • It was very dark, but I saw their headlights clearly.

 

  • If I had been cought, I would have been killed or beated up by them.
  • If I had been caught, I would have been killed or beaten up by them.

 

  • So at the moment, my diriving technic was slightly better than Nicolas Terol(Moto GP driver).
  • So at the moment, my driving technic was slightly better than Nicolas Terol's (Moto GP driver).

 

  • I run through small allies, and several corners and intersections.
  • I drove through small allies, and several corners and intersections.

 

  • The black car chased me, it was around 300m behind me.
  • The black car chased me. it was around 300m behind me.

 

  • It was very dengarous car chase.
  • It was a very dangerous car chase.

 

  • If someone had suddenly come up in front of me, I would have hit someone with my motocycle, because I run through small allies at around 100km.
  • If someone had suddenly come up in front of me, I would have hit that person (with my motocycle) because I was speeding through small allies at around 100km/h.

 

  • There were big steel pipes not to let cars go inside.
  • There were big steel pipes to stop cars from driving in.

 

  • And then, stupid gangstars came, but I already inside the site.
  • And then, the stupid gangstars came but I was already inside the premise safely.

 
There were quite a bit of unnecessary commas...but good job!! your entry was easily understood!

I'm glad you managed to escape from those yakuzas!
May 17th 2011 01:23 Tomo-Taro
Describing our memories in English is very difficult.
They were not Yakuza, but just stupid bad guys.

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