summer semester

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Today is beginning of summer semester! I took first LA(Liberal arts) class today, but I was late...I hate shuttle bus...please come to bus stop on time... btw, LA class was super hard for me...we got some HW and we have to write essay next class...too early...oooh poor... I'm gonna die... so, I looked around Fisherman's Wharf for a hour because I wanted to escape from reality...and I met a magician who came from Las vegas. He suddenly showed me some tramp magics and he said, give me tips! oh shoot,,, however there was beautiful landscape and, it was sunny day today. I really like Northpoint building without far away from my place.
Jun 21st 2011 08:21 creamcream

  • Today is beginning of summer semester!
  • Today is the start of summer semester!

 

  • I took first LA(Liberal arts) class today, but I was late...
  • I had my first LA(Liberal arts) class today, but I was late...

 

  • I hate shuttle bus...
  • I hate the shuttle bus...

 

  • please come to bus stop on time...
  • please come to the bus stop on time...

 

  • we got some HW and we have to write essay next class...
  • we got some HW and we have to write an essay for our next class...

 

  • too early...
  • It's too soon...

 

  • oooh poor...
  • oooh poor me ...

 

  • so, I looked around Fisherman's Wharf for a hour because I wanted to escape from reality...
  • so, I looked around Fisherman's Wharf for an hour because I wanted to escape from reality...

 

  • and I met a magician who came from Las vegas.
  • and I met a magician who came from Las Vegas.

 

  • He suddenly showed me some tramp magics and he said, give me tips!
  • He suddenly showed me some trap magic and he said, "give me tips!"

 

  • oh shoot,,, however there was beautiful landscape and, it was sunny day today.
  • oh shoot,,, however the landscape was beautiful and, it was a sunny day today.

 

  • I really like Northpoint building without far away from my place.
  • I really like the Northpoint building, which isn't far away from my place.

 
Good luck on your essay!
Jun 21st 2011 08:27 tossy
Thank you creamcream!! I'll help your Japanese:)
Jun 21st 2011 08:44 creamcream
ありがとうございます!
Jun 21st 2011 08:37 Jackie

  • Today is beginning of summer semester!
  • Today is the beginning of the summer semester!

 

  • I took first LA(Liberal arts) class today, but I was late...
  • I took my first LA(Liberal arts) class today, but I was late...

 

  • I hate shuttle bus...
  • I hate the shuttle bus... (or I hate shuttle buses...)

 

  • please come to bus stop on time...
  • please come to the bus stop on time...

 

  • btw, LA class was super hard for me...
  • btw, the LA class was super hard for me...

 

  • we got some HW and we have to write essay next class...
  • we got some HW and we have to write an essay for the next class...

 

  • so, I looked around Fisherman's Wharf for a hour because I wanted to escape from reality...
  • so, I looked around Fisherman's Wharf for an hour because I wanted to escape from reality...

 

  • He suddenly showed me some tramp magics and he said, give me tips!
  • He suddenly showed me some tramp (do you mean trump?) magics and he said, give me tips!

 

  • oh shoot,,, however there was beautiful landscape and, it was sunny day today.
  • oh shoot,,, however there was a beautiful landscape, and it was sunny day today.

 

  • I really like Northpoint building without far away from my place.
  • I really like the Northpoint building without which isn't far away from my place. (It might be more natural to say "...which is close to my place")

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Good luck with your summer semester classes!
Jun 21st 2011 08:43 tossy
Thanks a lot Jackie!! I'll do my best about summer semester classes!
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