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PUBLIC_FLAG_#{@journal.pf_int} RSS feed of Lyao's latest journal entries Nov 09th 2009 14:28
Hello everyone , My name is luyao . I'm a chinese girl , I'm 18years old ,I am a middle school student , I hope make many friends .
I like playing comeputer game and wantching TV and so on . I like eta apples very much . Beacuse they are keep our body health . I like English very much , but my english is not well .
This is me !
Nov 09th 2009 20:45 njkt
  • English
  • Japanese, Mandarin

  • Hello everyone , My name is luyao .
  • Hello everyone,  my name is Luyao .
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  • I'm a chinese girl , I'm 18years old ,I am a middle school student , I hope make many friends .
  • I'm a Chinese girl, I'm 18 years old, I am a middle school student, and I hope to make many friends.
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  • I like playing comeputer game and wantching TV and so on .
  • I like playing computer games and watching TV and so on.
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  • I like eta apples very much .
  • I like eating apples very much, because they are keep our body healthy.
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  • Beacuse they are keep our body health .
  • Beacuse they are keep our body health .
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  • I like English very much , but my english is not well .
  • I like English very much, but my English is bad.
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you just made some spelling mistakes, but it ok. I changed some sentences to sound more natural.

:D
Nov 10th 2009 10:35 Lija リア
  • English
  • Japanese

  • Hello everyone , My name is luyao .
  • Hello everyone, my name is Luyao .
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  • I'm a chinese girl , I'm 18years old ,I am a middle school student , I hope make many friends .
  • I'm a Chinese girl, I'm 18 years old , I am a middle school student, and I hope make many friends .
Comment  
  • I like playing comeputer game and wantching TV and so on .
  • I like playing computer games and watching  TV and so on .
Comment  
  • I like eta apples very much .
  • I like eating apples very much .
Comment  
  • Beacuse they are keep our body health .
  • They keep our bodies healthy.
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  • I like English very much , but my english is not well .
  • I like English very much, but my English isn't very good.
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I could understand everything you wrote.Good job :]
Dec 01st 2009 12:01 Arus25
  • Vietnamese
  • English, Mandarin

Can we use "middle school student", or it should be "highschool".
I wonder about the hierachy of the educational system. Besides elementary, highchool, college or university, what else could we use.
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  • English

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