I wanna go to a planetarium in Tokyo!

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I wanna go to a planetarium in Tokyo!

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Jul 29th 2010 10:07

I went to a planetarium in Osaka on 18th. It was about black holes. I'm really interested in them, so I had a lot of fun. A project by Shokotan is held in a planetarium in Tokyo. It looks fun, so I wanna go there, but it's too far..

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Jul 29th 2010 10:24 robfjohnson

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A project by Shokotan is held in a planetarium in Tokyo.
There is A project by Shokotan is being held in a planetarium in Tokyo.

Very good. Even the sentence I corrected was good as-is, although "There is a project..." sounds slightly less halting and is how I would have said it.