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1.After the project has been completed, it's can establish the domestic productive capacity of aluminum curved heat exchanger, and the government tax is increased substantially.
2. Promote the domestic aluminum material processing technology , and integrate technology platform for industry, government and academia.

Industry imports brazing and bending machine, developing pure aluminum tube composition design and evaluating fins and brazing process, overcoming the problems of welding stress concentration and spread corrosion.

(1)The new products made by bending process can more big area and raise rate of heat transfer, can satisfied product market.
(2)In Taiwan can make aluminum technology can be more better, expect102 103 years can raise the business volume one hundred million and three hundred million

Jul 29th 2011 04:56

  • After the project has been completed, it's can establish the domestic productive capacity of aluminum curved heat exchanger, and the government tax is increased substantially.
  • After the project has been completed, it's can establish the domestic productive capacity of aluminum curved heat exchanger, and the government tax is increased substantially. single or plural?

 

  • Promote the domestic aluminum material processing technology , and integrate technology platform for industry, government and academia.
  • Promote the domestic aluminum material processing technology , and integrate technology platform for industry, government and academia. single or plural?

 

  • Industry imports brazing and bending machine, developing pure aluminum tube composition design and evaluating fins and brazing process, overcoming the problems of welding stress concentration and spread corrosion.
  • Industry imports brazing and bending machine, developing pure aluminum tube composition design and evaluating fins and brazing process, overcoming the problems of welding stress concentration and spread corrosion. wrong word probably

 

  • (1)The new products made by bending process can more big area and raise rate of heat transfer, can satisfied product market.
  • (1)The new products made by bending process can more big area and raise rate of heat transfer, can satisfied product market. wrong words / tense

 

  • (2)In Taiwan can make aluminum technology can be more better, expect102 103 years can raise the business volume one hundred million and three hundred million
  • (2)In Taiwan can make aluminum technology can be more better, expect102 103 years can to raise the business volume one hundred million and three hundred million

 
Hi Vanessa,
Use simpler sentences. The style of shorthand science writing takes time to master.
Aug 03rd 2011 00:48 vanessa
thank you :)
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