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This is my first dairy here. I think I can start from introducing myself. I live in Taiwan, located at the East-South of China. Taiwan is an island, surrounding beauty ocean. Of course many famous travel spots are related with ocean and beach. For example, Kenting(墾丁) is a famous traveling spot, not also foreign tourist like it, but also local residents love it very much. Kenting is a nature landscape, and you can see white sand, swimming people anywhere. Activities all you can think playing in the water can be found there, but some have to pay money. Anyway, it’s a good place to enjoy and relax. A paragraph seems not enough to describe my lovely country, but it’s time to go to bed. Maybe I will try to introduce the food I like. Here is really full of delicious food, but I don’t know whether it’s suit for foreigner.
Nov 11th 2009 05:24 ymistry

  • This is my first dairy here.
  • This is my first dairy entry here.

 

  • I think I can start from introducing myself.
  • I think I can start from by introducing myself.

 

  • I live in Taiwan, located at the East-South of China.
  • I live in Taiwan, located at the East-South of China.** This is grammatically correct, but in English we usually say "South-East"

 

  • Taiwan is an island, surrounding beauty ocean.
  • Taiwan is an island, surrounding beauty surrounded by a beautiful ocean.

 

  • Of course many famous travel spots are related with ocean and beach.
  • Of course many famous travel spots are related with to the ocean and beach.

 

  • For example, Kenting(墾丁) is a famous traveling spot, not also foreign tourist like it, but also local residents love it very much.
  • For example, Kenting(墾丁) is a famous traveling spot, not also all foreign tourist like it, but also all local residents love it very much.

 

  • Kenting is a nature landscape, and you can see white sand, swimming people anywhere.
  • Kenting is a nature landscape, and you can see white sand, swimming people anywhere. and people swimming  everywhere.

 

  • Activities all you can think playing in the water can be found there, but some have to pay money.
  • Any water activity you can think of can be played there, but some cost money.

 

  • Here is really full of delicious food, but I don’t know whether it’s suit for foreigner.
  • Here My country is really full of delicious food, but I don’t know whether it’s suited for foreigners.

 
Nov 11th 2009 11:37 Hanna

For ymistry:
Thank you very much!
Hanna
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