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Jul 24th 2012 20:57
Who bring a dog in a schoolroom? It would never happened in Japan.Lol
Who have brought a god in a classroom? It would have never happening in Jappan.Lol

Which sentence is correct?
If you have better sentence, could you kindly teach me?
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誰がこの犬を教室に連れてきたのでしょうか？
日本では絶対にありえないですね。

どちらの、センテンスが正しいのでしょうか？

もしも、もっと良いセンテンスがあったら教えていただけないでしょうか？
heirii
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 24th 2012 21:15
  • Who bring a dog in a schoolroom?

  • Who brings a dog to a classroom?

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • It would never happened in Japan.

  • It would never happened in Japan.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • Who have brought a god in a classroom?

  • Who have brought a dog to a classroom?

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • It would have never happening in Jappan.

  • It would have never happening in Jappan.

1 people think this correction is good.  
  • If you have better sentence, could you kindly teach me?

  • If you have a better sentence, could you kindly teach me?

1 people think this correction is good.  
Hi, Toshiaki! ^0^
There are a few ways to say it, but I've given you two options.

としあきさん、こんにちは！ ^0^
正しいセンテンスを作りたいならのにいくつかの選択肢がありますが、その中の二つを薦めました。　でもその他にも正しいセンテンスがあるかもしれません。　
Jul 24th 2012 21:23 Toshiaki
THank you so much for your correction!
This is for you=^-^=
正しいセンテンスを作りたいならば、いくつかの選択肢がありますが、その中の二つをお勧めします。
Anna
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 24th 2012 23:29
  • Who bring a dog in a schoolroom?

  • Who brings a dog into a schoolroom classroom?

 
  • It would never happened in Japan.

  • It would never happened in Japan!

    I think an exclamation mark is more appropriate here.

 
  • Who have brought a god in a classroom?

  • Who have brought a god dog into a the classroom?

 
  • It would have never happening in Jappan.

  • It would have never happening in Jappan.

 
  • If you have better sentence, could you kindly teach me?

  • If you have a better sentence, could you kindly teach me?

    "would you be able to teach it to me please?" is a more natural way of saying the last part of the sentence I think.

 
Apart from the changes I've made, both sentences are correct (^.^) I can't think of any alternatives though I'm afraid (>.<)
Jul 24th 2012 23:31 Anna
Sorry, I have no idea why that posted twice - my internet messed up for some reason (-_-)
Jul 24th 2012 23:34 Toshiaki
Thank you so much for your corrections!
Thank you so much for teaching me a nalural English!
"would you be able to teach it to me please?"
Jul 24th 2012 23:40 Anna
Sure xD you have my on facebook so feel free to ask me any questions you have (^.^)
cashmeritan
Thank you for your correction!
Jul 26th 2012 06:58
  • Who bring a dog in a schoolroom?

  • Who bring a dog in a schoolroom? Who would bring a dog to school?

    This one sounds more natural :)

 
  • It would never happened in Japan.

  • It That would never happened in Japan.

 
  • Who have brought a god in a classroom?

  • Who have brought a god in a classroom? Who would have brought their dog to class?

    Another way you could say it! :)

 
  • It would have never happening in Jappan.

  • It would have never happening in Jappan. That never would happen here in Japan.

    And another way to say it :P

 
The people who corrected before me did a good job, I'm only showing you some alternative sentences you can use.

Jul 26th 2012 19:27 Toshiaki
Thank you so much for tearching me another sentences!=^-^=
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