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Batting Center Good job! I just changed some of your sentences to be a little more natural :)
I love batting centers. I often went in my hometown and...
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Earthquake Hey I've also heard of the earthquake in the news.
I hope the nature will calm down soon. I'm going to visit Tokyo in a few weeks^^
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Tokyo Disney Land Thank you, georgiana and Rachie.
Scream machines are like roller coasters.
When you ride it, you cannot help screaming.
They are scary...
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Business Trip I wish i could go to Osaka and Toyama ^.^ and im sorry about the rain and all! I'm glad the trip concluded on a happy note, though.
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choose and concentrate Nice English. I have changed and added some extra words for you. I hope that this is what you wanted to say.
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Pronunciation you should record your pronunciation into MP 3 and compare to the original.
I also have problem about my pronunciation when I spoke with...
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Pronunciation Sounding out the words in your head can help but it does help to use your mouth and tongue too as it is these that do the work. I have pr...
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Plannig Summer Vacation The American word "vacation" will can perfectly substitute the word "holiday" in all of the corrections. So, use whic...
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Plannig Summer Vacation Nice English. Perhaps one of our American friends will advise you on using 'vacation' as I am not sure about its correct usage in this co...
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Welcome and Farewell party yes, to join a party it need to start talking about someting in your mind.
Keep practice then you will meet new friends in the party
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Infuluenza "Although" is usually placed at the beginning of its clause, whereas "though" may occur elsewhere and is the more com...
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Supermarkets If you go to London or another major city, it is possible that Japanese style sweets can be purchased. The Japan Centre in London sells a...
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Supermarkets Thank you, Martyn.
Aren't there Japanese traditional sweets (wagashi) shops in the UK?
They are so healthy and I recommend them.
That's a wonderful idea. I want to try it, too!
Funny xD !
Good job! I just changed some of your sentences to be a little more natural :) I love batting centers. I often went in my hometown and...
Hey I've also heard of the earthquake in the news. I hope the nature will calm down soon. I'm going to visit Tokyo in a few weeks^^ ...
Thank you, Frog. I'm scared of typhoon.
Thank you, Previously and n. I haven't been there yet.
Thank you, k-laker and n. Yes, I want to enjoy talking in a party.
Thank you, Journey_Kite and n. I took a trip during this summer vacation.
Thank you, k-laker. If you want to go there, go Meguro!!
すごく分かりやすくて、英語が上手です! 昨日、ニューズで日本の台風に関する記事がありました。大変ですね。。
Thank you, georgiana and Rachie. Scream machines are like roller coasters. When you ride it, you cannot help screaming. They are scary...
どういたしまして。
Thank you, Martyn.
Onigiri are always good though :D
Sounds like fun! :)
Thank you, Emilio.
I wish i could go to Osaka and Toyama ^.^ and im sorry about the rain and all! I'm glad the trip concluded on a happy note, though.
That sounds like fun! 楽しかったですねえ! You're English was very good, by the way. There were just a few minor mistakes. ;)
Thank you! Do you work for your family? That's great!!
Good English. Check 'salon' because I am not sure that it is the word that you wanted.
Nice English. I have changed and added some extra words for you. I hope that this is what you wanted to say.
Sounds interesting!
Hello! My name is Brian. I hope you don't mind my correcting your post! I hope your stomach feels better!
I hope your stomach feels better soon. Throw away that melon!
Hi mekei, I've eaten Teriyaki chicken ramen! It was good! I believe it isn't a typical Japanese ramen flavour?
Nice to get present from hometown. It empovering your working life.
you should record your pronunciation into MP 3 and compare to the original. I also have problem about my pronunciation when I spoke with...
Sounding out the words in your head can help but it does help to use your mouth and tongue too as it is these that do the work. I have pr...
The American word "vacation" will can perfectly substitute the word "holiday" in all of the corrections. So, use whic...
Nice English. Perhaps one of our American friends will advise you on using 'vacation' as I am not sure about its correct usage in this co...
Good luck reading the newspapers :)
sounds too healthy !
yes, to join a party it need to start talking about someting in your mind. Keep practice then you will meet new friends in the party
same in Thailand....Fast Fashion
I've never heard of such a shop! Sounds delicious. :3
I though that Obon is quite interesting. Working life always make you busy on holiday.
Thank you, Martyn. I'll do my best not to be wastefully.
Sounds like a fun day, I want to ride the "scream machines" too, whatever they are :)
It does sound like a very expensive meal.
"Although" is usually placed at the beginning of its clause, whereas "though" may occur elsewhere and is the more com...
Working make life valuable to family.
brown rice is good taste, too
Nice English again Mekei-san. I, too, like brown rice and I also like wild rice and basmati rice.
Nice English. Corrections are in red and suggestions in blue. 英語をがんばってください。
If you go to London or another major city, it is possible that Japanese style sweets can be purchased. The Japan Centre in London sells a...
Thank you, Martyn. Aren't there Japanese traditional sweets (wagashi) shops in the UK? They are so healthy and I recommend them.
Thank you!!
Thank you, soonga. I may listen to incorrect information.
Thank you, Martyn. I may have a prejudice against program.
Thank you, Martyn. The interview was more interesting than I thought.