"Children of men"
Dec 01st 2009 11:54
Yesterday I lent free a dvd "Children of men" from public library.
Today I watched the dvd by computer.
The plot of this movie is very simple.
In 2027, the world of women are become sterile.
The world are fallen into utter confusion.
But Illegal immigrant of girl became pregnant by a miracle.
A hero made every endeavor to defend that girl from the bad power.
I was impressed by the movie.
This movie said, "The dignity of new life".
I also thought that new life is precious.
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Yesterday I borrowed free a DVD, "Children of men," from the public library.
Today I watched the DVD on my computer.
In 2027, all the women in the world have become sterile.
The world has fallen into utter confusion. [Alternative: The world is in utter confusion.]
But a girl who is an illegal immigrant becomes pregnant by a miracle. [So far you have been using the present perfect tense; so you must continue telling the story as if it is in the present.]
A hero tries in every way to defend that girl from an evil power. [You have not mentioned this "power" until now, so "an" is more appropriate than "the."]
This movie spoke of "the dignity of new life".
I also think/believe that new life is precious. [Saying that you thought this means that you don't think so any more. This needs to be present tense.]
Yesterday I lent rented (lent is the giver, not the receiver) a free DVD from the public library. I rented "Children of Men". (two sentences is better, I think)
Today I watched the dvd by on my computer.
In 2027, the world of women all the women of the world become sterile.
The world are fallen falls into utter confusion.
But an illegal immigrant of girl became becomes pregnant by a miracle.
A hero made every endeavor to defend that girl from the bad power. (explain the bad power more?)
I also thought think that new life is precious.
As icsteffi-san said, in the sentence "A lends something to B," A is the giver, and B is the receiver. In the sentence "A borrows something from B," B is the giver, and A is the receiver.
I saw that movie at the cinema. One of the better films I've seen. The way the camera followed the main character was great.