This crappy day

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I woke up today and i saw snow right behind my window. it fell with big flakes (снег падал крупными хлопьями). It was beautiful. I was caring about my mother, because she has influenza. All my house was on me. After that day I finally understand that I want just live for myself for next 5-6 years
Nov 19th 2009 03:56 Cacarter1984

  • I woke up today and i saw snow right behind my window.
  • I woke up today and i saw snow right outside my window.

 

  • it fell with big flakes (снег падал крупными хлопьями).
  • the flakes were very big (снег падал крупными хлопьями).

 

  • I was caring about my mother, because she has influenza.
  • I was worrying about my mother, because she has influenza.

 

  • All my house was on me.
  • All my house was on me. Not sure about this one.

 

  • After that day I finally understand that I want just live for myself for next 5-6 years
  • After that day I finally realize that I just want to live by myself for the next 5-6 years.

 
отлично!
Nov 19th 2009 04:55 wordsofwisdom61

(I was worrying about my mother, because she has influenza) I meant here ухаживала. Maybe it'll be better so: I was looking after my mother, because she has influenza?
Nov 20th 2009 01:17 Cacarter1984

Oh yeah, that makes sense. I would say "taking care of my mother"
Nov 20th 2009 01:27 Cacarter1984

Also I think you should say "crappy" instead of "creepy" for the title. :)
Nov 21st 2009 04:17 Cacarter1984

Твоя мама чувствует себя лучше? :)
Nov 21st 2009 06:12 wordsofwisdom61

Да, уже почти выздоровела. Сейчас просто зима и все болеют гриппом.
Nov 21st 2009 09:16 RescueRanger

  • All my house was on me.
  • Looking after the house was all up to me.

 
Great post!
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