my future job

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Now I’m second-year-student. what will I do when I graduate? It’s quite hard to answer. In my opinion there are some standards for my future job.
First of all, my future job must respond for my life. I earn enough money for a comfortable life. I don’t have to worry about where I live, what I eat, what I wear…I don’t want to have much money. It’s only medium of exchange. It makes our lives easier. But sometimes you can become its slave.
The most important which my future job must have is that I really like it. It makes me feel highly enthusiastic and energetic when I wake up to go to work. I enjoy it, try my best to finish it. Sometimes I can be tired and stressful but I will never give it up.
Further more I love travelling a lot. So a job that I can travel attracts me very much. I will have more chances to go around the world, enlarge my knowledge, know more about other country and their culture . it’s really wonderful.
On the other hand, friends are very important with me. My future job must have good- working environment . I can communicate with others. I can make friends, chat with them. It helps me much especially when I feel stressful
Last but not least. My future job have to give me many challenges. I have opportunities to improve myself. It makes me grow up. For example you work for an international organization such as the UN. You have good salary, good working environment, but you don’t have chance to win promotion. Some position can’t change . you will feel bored.
As the result of all I choose to become an auditor. Many people say: “ ah, auditor…it is very hard for a litter girl. Why don’t you change to become an accountant?”. To me, auditors is very different from accountants. Maybe when I get older or I get married. I will think about it. But now I will try my best to become a good auditor in the near future.
Feb 05th 2010 12:20 alek85

  • In my opinion there are some standards for my future job.
  • In my opinion, there are some standards for my future job.

 

  • I earn enough money for a comfortable life.
  • I shouldearn enough money for a comfortable life.

 

  • I don’t have to worry about where I live, what I eat, what I wear…I don’t want to have much money.
  • I shouldn't (don’t) have to worry about where I would live, what would I eat, what I wouldwear…I don’t want to have a lot of (much) money.

 

  • The most important which my future job must have is that I really like it.
  • The most important thing about (which) my future job must have is that I really like it.

 

  • It makes me feel highly enthusiastic and energetic when I wake up to go to work.
  • It wouldmakes me feel highly enthusiastic and energetic when I wake up to go to work.

 

  • I enjoy it, try my best to finish it.
  • I wouldenjoy it, try my best to finish it.

 

  • Sometimes I can be tired and stressful but I will never give it up.
  • Sometimes I couldbe tired and stressed,but I wouldnever give (it) up.

 

  • Further more I love travelling a lot.
  • Furthermore,I love travelling a lot.

 

  • On the other hand, friends are very important with me.
  • On the other hand, friends are very important withtome.

 

  • I can communicate with others.
  • I wouldcommunicate with others.

 

  • It helps me much especially when I feel stressful
  • It wouldhelps me much especially when I feel stressful

 

  • My future job have to give me many challenges.
  • My future job (have to) should give me many challenges.

 

  • To me, auditors is very different from accountants.
  • To me, auditors (is) are very different from accountants.

 
You may want to look over the subjunctive and conditional tenses. You are missing a lot of "woulds" and "coulds", and your tenses are generally hard to understand. Pretty good otherwise...
Feb 09th 2010 19:12 TamaChan

thanks you so much^^

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