Try to keep a diary in English!

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Nov 27th 2009 16:24

At the beginning of second semester, I decided to keep a diary in English because my English teacher recommend it strongly.
He said that it was very helpful to improve English and I believe his saying. At first, I started writing some short sentences on my notebook. I think that there were many mistakes but I tried to keep a diary everyday. But there was no comment about my diary although my teacher checked if I kept a diary or not. So, I felt that Keeping a diary was very helpful but not interesting and after that I gave it up.
However, after I knew this site, I changed my mind. I made my mind to try to keep a diary again. I think there are many nice and helpful friends here. I can get some helps from them and give some advices to them. I believe I can make many nice friends and I'd like to help them.

Nov 27th 2009 16:37 Leda

English
Japanese , Korean

At the beginning of second semester, I decided to keep a diary in English because my English teacher recommend it strongly.
At the beginning of second semester, I decided to keep a diary in English because my English teacher strongly recommend it.

At first, I started writing some short sentences on my notebook.
At first, I started writing some short sentences in my notebook.

I think that there were many mistakes but I tried to keep a diary everyday.
I think that there were many mistakes, but I tried to keep a diary everyday.

But there was no comment about my diary although my teacher checked if I kept a diary or not.
But there was no comment about my diary, although my teacher checked if I kept a diary or not.

So, I felt that Keeping a diary was very helpful but not interesting and after that I gave it up.
So, I felt that keeping a diary was very helpful but not interesting and after that I gave it up.

However, after I knew this site, I changed my mind.
However, after I knew found this site, I changed my mind.

I made my mind to try to keep a diary again.
I made up my mind to try to keep a diary again.

I can get some helps from them and give some advices to them.
I can get some help from them and give some advice to them.

Very nice job! ^_^ Your English is good!

Nov 28th 2009 00:41 carsont

English
Korean , French

At the beginning of second semester, I decided to keep a diary in English because my English teacher recommend it strongly.
At the beginning of second semester, I decided to keep a diary in English because my English teacher recommended it strongly.

He said that it was very helpful to improve English and I believe his saying.
He said that it was very helpful to improve English and I believe it (or: what he said).

At first, I started writing some short sentences on my notebook.
At first, I started writing some short sentences in my notebook. (or: I started by writing some short sentences in my notebook.)

But there was no comment about my diary although my teacher checked if I kept a diary or not.
But there was no comment about my diary although my teacher checked whether I was keeping it up (or: made sure I kept it up).