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A Man from England Good English and a nice sentiment. Try not to use too many sentences though, it's fine to put many ideas in the same sentence without usi...
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Japan Earthquake Your English is great! Please ask if you have questions. :)
I can't imagine how it was, and I can't imagine how it is now.. I'm glad t...
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iPod Akira
lazy phone!!
The iPhone is really a lazy phone as you say! ^^
The 8GB is enough for me because I delete any songs that one no lo...
Sep 16th 2008 07:54
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iPod i have the 8GB ipod as well,i don't really much care about sizes of an ipod as long as i have music to listen to,i'll be just fine with t...
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iPod >james
Thank you for correcting.^^
I think that I had to save my money for my next travel...
Actually, I have a chance to demonstra...
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iPod 遅くなりましたが、Happy Birthday!!
I've herad iPhone is not that good. Maybe it is just too complicated to put everything into one gadget.
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iPod The new Nano looks good! I have a 3G Nano that I bought less than a year ago, I've been thinking about buying an iPod Touch. But maybe it...
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Softball Well masumi, I just don't like all the things China is doing. Like during the opening games the little girl that sang wasn't even really ...
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Softball But US also had many people participate in the Olympics. I think they had the most with 600+ athletes. China also had 600+ athletes too.
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Softball I have not watched the game, but I heard that because America was too strong that the Olympic Committee was thinking about taking softbal...
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Harry Potter Tarubarin,
I've been continuing to read some paperbacks from last year. I usually find a paperback at book store or amazon. Reading is e...
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Harry Potter It's pretty much a masterpiece. I cried twice, which if I cry during anything it means it's good.
I can't believe it just came out in Ja...
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Harry Potter I've read The Golden Compass (although in England, the original title is "Northern Lights" - it was changed for the US edition ...
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Harry Potter Thank you for correcting, Jay.
The past sense is very difficult because so in Japanese is very simple...
Rieko,
I felt same thing du...
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Harry Potter Very nice English! Here is how I might say the same thing:
The new Harry Potter Book, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, came out ...
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Yokohama Hmm, interesting post!
I think when you are talking where you are from, it's important to keep in mind who you are talking to. For ex...
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Yokohama opening the port m... >james
That's too bad!
It was first time to see the fireworks up close.
I could sit in the first four rows, so it was nice view.
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Yokohama opening the port m... I went to that firework show about 4 years ago! It was great! It was the first time I ever saw a Doraemon-shaped firework. And Anpanma...
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Yokohama opening the port m... Wow! I envy you sooo much!!
I wanna see big fireworks too but I hate large crowds. heheh
The fireworks must have been so beautiful! ^^
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Yokohama opening the port m... I went to see the Yokohama fireworks this Sunday too while I was on my vacation in Japan. It was sooooo packed with people!! It was my se...
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Yokohama opening the port m... >gc3195
Thank you for correcting!
Various expressions help me to learn.
>YeoJin
Really? I love Yokohama, too. :)
Yokohama is...
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Yokohama opening the port m... I think either of these is right:
The firework display was held at 7:30 p.m.
The fireworks started 7:30 p.m.
but whatever is commo...
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Dog wear >Mikey
Thank you. But I think my level isn't enough to communicate... Learning foreign language is very difficult, isn't it?
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Dog wear I think your dog is cute with those tiny clothes on. ^^
I like small dogs because they're a lot cuter than big dogs.
Big dogs are a lit...
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Dog wear Masumi your english is really good. Even your grammar. There are some minor correction to be made but overall it looks good. Just minor g...
It is kind of him to stay instead of leaving.
Good English and a nice sentiment. Try not to use too many sentences though, it's fine to put many ideas in the same sentence without usi...
Your English is great! Please ask if you have questions. :) I can't imagine how it was, and I can't imagine how it is now.. I'm glad t...
Hi Masumi, it's surly a great way to improve your English by reading the book you like!
wow!! 40GB!! Your PC is occupied by songs. :D
>How many songs are you stocking in the iPod!? Hmm... I think it is 27 or 28 GB in my iPod. In iTunes, its more than 40GB!! :D I...
Akira lazy phone!! The iPhone is really a lazy phone as you say! ^^ The 8GB is enough for me because I delete any songs that one no lo...
i have the 8GB ipod as well,i don't really much care about sizes of an ipod as long as i have music to listen to,i'll be just fine with t...
>james Thank you for correcting.^^ I think that I had to save my money for my next travel... Actually, I have a chance to demonstra...
遅くなりましたが、Happy Birthday!! I've herad iPhone is not that good. Maybe it is just too complicated to put everything into one gadget. ...
The new Nano looks good! I have a 3G Nano that I bought less than a year ago, I've been thinking about buying an iPod Touch. But maybe it...
>Saotome Yeah, it was very fun. I hope that you can come and join. ^^ >mariana Let's go to a hot spring next time! >Tea...
楽しそうです。
Absolutely we had fun!!
>james Did you see the closing ceremony? I missed it...>< I am looking forward to the London Olympics. >Saotome I thoug...
Sounds like fun!! I wish I could go =(
> Saotome Don't forget the "simulated" opening ceremony fireworks and Tai Chi camp. http://www.aftenposten.no/english/spor...
Well masumi, I just don't like all the things China is doing. Like during the opening games the little girl that sang wasn't even really ...
But US also had many people participate in the Olympics. I think they had the most with 600+ athletes. China also had 600+ athletes too. ...
>Saotome Thank you for the corrections! ^^ Why did you think so? Actually, I've been felt the same way as you... >james It'...
I have not watched the game, but I heard that because America was too strong that the Olympic Committee was thinking about taking softbal...
I dunno bout you, but these games make me dislike China more...
Boo is such a cute name! Yeah... she looks so serious in the pictures... She was really into it! hehe
It looks like a nice and peaceful river to spend time at! Cute dog! Why did you name her Boo?
Snapping at drops of water is probably like snapping at insects.
Tarubarin, I've been continuing to read some paperbacks from last year. I usually find a paperback at book store or amazon. Reading is e...
It's pretty much a masterpiece. I cried twice, which if I cry during anything it means it's good. I can't believe it just came out in Ja...
I've read The Golden Compass (although in England, the original title is "Northern Lights" - it was changed for the US edition ...
Thank you for correcting, Jay. The past sense is very difficult because so in Japanese is very simple... Rieko, I felt same thing du...
Harry Potter, I've never read it, I'm sorry. Actually I'm not interested in H.P. I've seen a first film : )
Hello, nice to meet you. I can't stop reading your post as you have "Harry Potter" in the title. :) I read the English ve...
Very nice English! Here is how I might say the same thing: The new Harry Potter Book, Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows, came out ...
Hmm, interesting post! I think when you are talking where you are from, it's important to keep in mind who you are talking to. For ex...
>james That's too bad! It was first time to see the fireworks up close. I could sit in the first four rows, so it was nice view. ...
I went to that firework show about 4 years ago! It was great! It was the first time I ever saw a Doraemon-shaped firework. And Anpanma...
Wow! I envy you sooo much!! I wanna see big fireworks too but I hate large crowds. heheh The fireworks must have been so beautiful! ^^
I went to see the Yokohama fireworks this Sunday too while I was on my vacation in Japan. It was sooooo packed with people!! It was my se...
>gc3195 Thank you for correcting! Various expressions help me to learn. >YeoJin Really? I love Yokohama, too. :) Yokohama is...
I love Yokohama! Since last June, I have been hooked on Yokohama! How nice firewors! I envy you~
I think either of these is right: The firework display was held at 7:30 p.m. The fireworks started 7:30 p.m. but whatever is commo...
haha. Your dream sounds so funny!
I know a Japanese who's from Okaya City, Nagano Prefecture but she never mentions that she's from Okaya. ^^
See? ;) It's very weird...
She said, "Well, I guess I *am* from Kanagawa prefecture, but... I'm from Yokohama!" :)
>papajohn Thank you for correcting! How was your friend's answer? :)
Sorry, I realized I incorrectly changed one sentence, so I fixed it! :)
One of my very good friends is from Yokohama, I'll have to ask her later what prefecture she's from :)
>Mikey Thank you. But I think my level isn't enough to communicate... Learning foreign language is very difficult, isn't it? >...
I think your dog is cute with those tiny clothes on. ^^ I like small dogs because they're a lot cuter than big dogs. Big dogs are a lit...
Masumi your english is really good. Even your grammar. There are some minor correction to be made but overall it looks good. Just minor g...