Today, it rained heavily at noon
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Today at noon, when I was about to pick up my niece from her primary school, it rained heavily outside.
I put up an umbrella and walked in the rain.
The air was grey. They sound of rain echoed in my ears.
All the pedestrians were unfurling their umbrellas and cautioning not to be splashed by the rain.
I was cautioning too but the rain still splashed my shoes and the bottom of my jeans.
While I was awaiting the traffic light, the cars raced past and almost spattered rain on my clothes.
When I arrived at the school, my shoes and bottom of jeans were soaked.
The rain came violently but stopped quickly. It stopped in the meantime of we going back home.
I put up an umbrella and walked in the rain.
The air was grey. They sound of rain echoed in my ears.
All the pedestrians were unfurling their umbrellas and cautioning not to be splashed by the rain.
I was cautioning too but the rain still splashed my shoes and the bottom of my jeans.
While I was awaiting the traffic light, the cars raced past and almost spattered rain on my clothes.
When I arrived at the school, my shoes and bottom of jeans were soaked.
The rain came violently but stopped quickly. It stopped in the meantime of we going back home.
（今天中午下大雨了）
今天中午，当我正准备出门去侄女的小学接她放学，外面下起了大雨.
我撑着傘走在路上。空气灰濛濛一片，雨水的声音在我耳边响起。
路上行人都撑着傘，大家小心着不要被雨水淋湿。
我也很小心，但雨水还是溅湿了我的鞋子和裤脚。
当我在交通灯前等过马路时，汽车快速沖过大雨，车轮溅起水花，差点溅湿了我的衣服。
在我到达学校时，鞋子和裤脚己经湿透了。
不过，这场雨來的凶去得快。当我们回家的时候，己经雨过天晴了。
今天中午，当我正准备出门去侄女的小学接她放学，外面下起了大雨.
我撑着傘走在路上。空气灰濛濛一片，雨水的声音在我耳边响起。
路上行人都撑着傘，大家小心着不要被雨水淋湿。
我也很小心，但雨水还是溅湿了我的鞋子和裤脚。
当我在交通灯前等过马路时，汽车快速沖过大雨，车轮溅起水花，差点溅湿了我的衣服。
在我到达学校时，鞋子和裤脚己经湿透了。
不过，这场雨來的凶去得快。当我们回家的时候，己经雨过天晴了。
The sky was grey.
The sound of rain echoed in my ears.
All the pedestrians were opening their umbrellas and being careful not to be splashed by the rain.
'unfurling' is not wrong but it is not generally used to describe the opening of an umbrella. It is more often used to describe when a flag is hung up on a flag pole or a sail is put up on a ship.
I was careful too but the rain still splashed my shoes and the bottom of my jeans.
While I was awaiting the traffic light, the cars raced past and almost spattered rain on my clothes.
'almost spattered rain' is correct but it would be better to say 'and almost splashed my clothes' or 'and almost splashed me'
Also, 'awaiting the' is a little formal and 'waiting for the..' is probably better.
When I arrived at the school, my shoes and the bottom of my jeans were soaked.
You don't need 'the' here but it is not wrong either.
The rain was very heavy but stopped quickly.
It stopped in the meantime of we going back home.
I do not understand what you are trying to say here but this perhaps:
"It stopped before we left to go home"
You are so kind!